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There is a lot to take in with one's eyes...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 28, 2010 at 7:11 PM
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Loved between the mirror and a forlorn face! How utterly exquisite! Love you sweetie! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 28, 2010 at 5:29 PM
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A BEAUTIFUL AND THOUGHTFUL POEM, MAY GOD BLESS, HAVE A BLESSED DAY
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 28, 2010 at 10:03 AM
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"...between a mirror and the forelorn face..."
That's good. There's a lot between and never the twain shall meet.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 28, 2010 at 10:02 AM
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Amazing and rich with imagery, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on April 28, 2010 at 8:46 AM
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Shobana, with this one I see clearly through the doe-eyes ~ a splendour unfolding. This paints a mirage like portrait - I did enjoy this poem a lot ~ one (and with many) of my faves of yours. Elyse
xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on April 28, 2010 at 8:32 AM
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I think of a washed up actress
posted by
Lanetay
on April 28, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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I love those doe eyes and the slender person who has them. She should enjoy her mirror.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on April 28, 2010 at 4:09 AM
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freeing the eyed, an interesting idea.
posted by
Straightforward
on April 28, 2010 at 1:09 AM
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Re: Splendour
Hi CC, I do watch with brown eyes and smile too. And thanks so much for your lovely comment and visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 28, 2010 at 12:14 AM
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Re:
Hi Yellowrose, good to see you here again. Yes, it does seem that way sometimes.
posted by
shobana
on April 28, 2010 at 12:12 AM
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Splendour
Hi Shobana,so you watch and you remember and these are brown eyes and you smile and it doesn't seem long ago. To soon she will be a woman, but here she will always be yours.
You hit the spot this time.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 27, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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I'm thinking of the hunted and the hunter. in those still, quiet , frozen moments...of "Doe-eyed Splendour".
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 27, 2010 at 10:12 PM
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posted by
mariposa75
on April 27, 2010 at 9:11 PM
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Re: Hi
Thank you abanerjee and I know how you read poems so clearly by the way you write your summaries so well.
posted by
shobana
on April 27, 2010 at 8:59 PM
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Hi
Shobs, you make me want to see more and more of that forlorn face with her empty gaze staring at the space. I'm glued, and could just see what your excellent poem showed , but still ya know?
Lol
posted by
anib
on April 27, 2010 at 8:52 PM
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Re: shobana? the death of innocence. No doubt!
Yes dsm, sadly it is so. there is no place for innocence in the world I think. thank you for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 27, 2010 at 8:37 PM
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shobana? the death of innocence. No doubt!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 27, 2010 at 8:26 PM
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Excellent Shobana... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 27, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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Really nice stuff, Lady!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 27, 2010 at 8:01 PM
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Re: See you still have lots of wonderful writing in you........well done.
Thank you Kabu darling.
posted by
shobana
on April 27, 2010 at 8:00 PM
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See you still have lots of wonderful writing in you........well done.
posted by
Kabu
on April 27, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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