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CORNCRAKE
It's difficult for one as addlepated as I am these days to comment on 2 poems on the same page, but I liked that Moving On and now I enjoyed this too especially because
".........Or was it you, I am not sure?....... ...." LOL I used to get that way after a drink or ten
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 28, 2010 at 11:59 AM
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CORNCRAKE
I do hope you may get that itch scratched, but you won't hiding behind the garden shed as a Gnome. Loved that one too
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 28, 2010 at 11:50 AM
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Wow, love this back and forth, Corncrake!
The weaving of the mundane with the sublime is masterful..Kudos!!
posted by
Katray2
on April 28, 2010 at 11:19 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
Yes Bill sadly we who live out in the sticks blow on dandelions to tell lunch time and moon over daisies, but such is the gentle passing of time.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 28, 2010 at 7:26 AM
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Re: E.E.
thank you E.E. you make all the agony worth while. The first poem I try and write well it hasn't been written yet today, The second is hidden somewhere on a disk and will probably have to be analyzed perhaps. What happens when the well runs dry?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 28, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: CC. Of course there is Amnesty on my site.....I have no prejudices that
Of course I was not worried about you Kabu, it was your loyal fans I feared.
At a very early age I learned one does not praise wives at the risk of an outraged hubby. But I don't think Wiley would mind if I said you would look alright in a beer barrel and I think we can safely talk shoes .
posted by
C_C_T
on April 28, 2010 at 7:15 AM
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Re: Shobana
Some more Shobana? First I fish the orchid out of the water for you and now you want me to unmuddle conclusions alright I'll try and do that next time. Thank you for your interesting comments and by the way is there such a thing as a brown flower and that was a lovely thoughtful poem it was worth waiting two days for.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 28, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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So you got to thinking too CC and came up with somemore muddled conclusions..LOL. That's what happens when you think too much. Well, there really is nothing wrong with wearing black socks...really!! Great poems as usual and thanks for the visit. I have touch-me-nots in my garden instead of forget-me-nots LOL. Love violets but don't have them too. Please carry on with the gardening and post more pictures.
posted by
shobana
on April 27, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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CC. Of course there is Amnesty on my site.....I have no prejudices that
I am aware of.......except to poke fun sometimes...especially at the Old Dart....... and I love your maleattitude towards clothes......and shopping. Most of the fun in shopping is the browsing and choosing. And we can talk shoes anytime you wish. I was actually looking for shoes yesterday in the shops, but there was nothing special in the shops so I came away shoeless. Being as I have less than 30 pairs currently....I have a NEED for more...you I am sure would understand.
ps Kudos to the poetry here.
posted by
Kabu
on April 27, 2010 at 3:49 PM
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This conversation you bring about in 'just thinking' is so interesting--- and I like to hit upon your blog here because it always seems to make me think... yes spins me around and each new poem of yours is always rich with some-many a metaphor that brings a new perspective. is why I like your poetry CC - "the change of one can bring about a new found interest of another - or more interest in the 'change' as well" (if that makes sense
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and Moving on...
Okay I love that: 'toots' --- (made me giggle) - and the 'slap ass' comment --- has to be english...I confess I feel a bit of pain from this one - almost 'anger' at one that can't be figured out for the hidden - or private depth of the character. This was passionate. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 27, 2010 at 11:35 AM
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CORNCAKE
So thinking’s a natural process that’s along the lines of the botanical clock. It opens newly each day. Certainly such a thinking process helps in thinking of a masterpiece in art as a metaphor of hurt sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 27, 2010 at 11:04 AM
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