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Re: Vivid imagery and flow!
Thank you Raye .
posted by
C_C_T
on April 27, 2010 at 6:48 AM
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Re: Janey
Thank you Janey
posted by
C_C_T
on April 27, 2010 at 6:47 AM
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Re: CORNCRAKE
You are just too secretly romantic Wiley, but it paid off
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 11:14 PM
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Re: She is a lovely poem indeed as is water vol..
Do you know Kabu the water vole is nearly extinct over here because people let mink free and they chomp them up. I hope your bush is growing will you use mesh to cover it in Winter? One has to be careful of condensation using plastic. Thank you so much for all your comments undeserved I assure you.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 11:11 PM
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Re: Shobana
Hi Shobana, you are so observant the Orchid floats away. She retains her integrity.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 11:03 PM
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CORNCAKE
b Something of the senses in this case fragrance becomes the memory that evokes the words. In the second poem I find surrealistic images tidied up around the rag doll sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 26, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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"She" is just beautiful CC. and you know as I was reading the other poem, I was thinking why you think orchid as dainty...It stays in bloom for days at end.
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shobana
on April 26, 2010 at 7:42 PM
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She is a lovely poem indeed as is water vol..
I love the picture I see as the sleuth is opened and the warer lily floats through.Aren'twater lilies such peaceful floating beauty.
posted by
Kabu
on April 26, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Her lavender scent would have hooked me too pard, great poetry
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 26, 2010 at 6:22 PM
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Loved both poems but I especially liked
She. Wonderful pictures are being painted with your words.
posted by
janey_
on April 26, 2010 at 5:24 PM
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These were stunning and fabulous! I simply adored the earth kneaded the substance! Just awesome imagery throughout! And I concur with Elyse's comment! Excellent work! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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Vivid imagery and flow!
posted by
Katray2
on April 26, 2010 at 11:28 AM
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CC --- such grand writing. She - her memory is strong yet...her eyes gifted you .
and Water Vole: Like the wind and the willow - this varmint could speak of such --- I enjoyed the visions this one revealed (wow)
- and the metaphors and analogy continue to float well after this read....the rag-doll of the past shares such memories. Excellent write
... E.E. (inspired)
posted by
elysianfields
on April 26, 2010 at 10:51 AM
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