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Another whisper for I wonder, too!
I loved this stanza:
You can stay here and just rest
Just sleep, it might be for the best.
When you wake you will be free
To live your life quite naturally.
I think this is just great advice all the way around! This was a very exquisite piece! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2010 at 9:40 AM
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Re: E.E.
Yes it would be nice E.E. but, but, I think the soulful touch was meant for single ladies.
Perhaps you could just visit ask at the gate. C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 12:11 AM
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Re: Spiderfly
Thank you Spiderfly
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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Re: Charming story. Pat.
Thank you Pat
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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Shobana
Shobana I could lie like a cat in the sun and play with your poems and watch my lace curtains dance with She. Alas I have to strim the weeds in my garden or they will stifle the small apple trees and the strimmer I bought is killer, but knocks the weeds over compliments over-awe me
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 11:59 PM
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Re: Shobana
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 11:53 PM
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Re: dsm
Yes sir, I get your drift, get digging first.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 11:41 PM
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Re: Janey
Thank you Janey glad you liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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Re: WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ENDING....I BELIEVE YOU ARE A
Probably an old soul Kabu I guess it's gals like you who inspire.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 11:34 PM
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truly a joy to read
posted by
janey_
on April 25, 2010 at 5:14 PM
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CORNCRAKE, a wonderful metaphoe: life is a garden, everyone get busy!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 25, 2010 at 4:33 PM
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Hi CC - I loved these tales of yours, such passion and feelings of love you evoke in them taking us on a lovely walk through those gardens you write of. Thanks for your visit CC and did your mom really have a well in a kitchen? I'm glad you could make something out of the poem..
posted by
shobana
on April 25, 2010 at 4:22 PM
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Charming story.
posted by
Pat_B
on April 25, 2010 at 2:30 PM
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my kind of poem and i loved the way it flowed, beautiful......
posted by
spiderfly
on April 25, 2010 at 2:09 PM
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Like the garden of Eden - Like a Shepherd(ing) of sorts - and I would want to return - again and again...Bravo!!!! CC - Oh I wish this was not the 'end' of such a great thing here - Whispers, notes from a heart, angels and garden --- ; the best soulful touch anyone could hope for. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 25, 2010 at 12:49 PM
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL ENDING....I BELIEVE YOU ARE A
TRUE POET AN OLD SOUL.
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2010 at 11:43 AM
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