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What great writing. I'm sure that soon it will be doing all of that here again. I am so familiar with all of it except for "St. Somewhere".
posted by
TAPS.
on April 28, 2010 at 11:06 AM
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Pat
I really admire the way you 'catch the moments' - and there's always more to them than meets the eye at first glance...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 26, 2010 at 5:42 AM
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Fantastic descriptions there, Pat. Keep safe
posted by
Hackthorne19
on April 26, 2010 at 2:33 AM
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Spring Dance
Yes it is frightening really, I saw it on the Tele, hope you escaped it, I would keep that cellar ready.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 26, 2010 at 12:02 AM
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PatB
You keep safe out of those winds and stuff luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 25, 2010 at 11:38 AM
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this is superb, a picture in words....I could relate to every word, see the
scene in my minds eye. Keep this to include in a story sometime. Hey the book is coming along nicely. and at your suggestion, it is a quick easy feel good read, with poems included and probably pics.
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2010 at 8:19 AM
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This is superbly written, poetic, actually.
The way you put words together is a work of art.
This is the season for tornados, yes, we have them, too. So far so good, but I'm sure we will have our run with a few this Spring/Summer.
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 25, 2010 at 6:58 AM
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