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What a magnificent closing couplet! Its depth is staggering and no pun intended! Love you my dear Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 26, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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So few will see that thirst you speak of completely quenched.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 25, 2010 at 2:25 PM
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even if wishing in the well ---
I like this poem a lot Shobana - shares such depth and meaning to quench - "I thirst" is one of my fave beginning to mediations ~ Elyse
xoxox Hope you had a wonderful weekend. xoxo
posted by
elysianfields
on April 25, 2010 at 12:55 PM
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shobana
I The pail and your poem are things to be appreciated 1ove. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 25, 2010 at 9:50 AM
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yes sometimes life feels as deep as a well
posted by
Lanetay
on April 25, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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Hi sweetpea, great little poem how wonderful.
posted by
Kabu
on April 25, 2010 at 7:54 AM
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Deep
I never looking down deep wells, but I get the feeling. Would you believe it Shobana when my mother was a small girl there was a well in the kitchen which used to frighten her, one had to kneel and dip a bucket into it. Very convenient until the village flooded. Now your poem, yes you do seem as though you have been there. It is nice how you make it happen with thoughts darting from the well to the importance of its contents.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 25, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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I think I wanna learn how to write poems, can you teach me coz you're the best ;)
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on April 25, 2010 at 4:18 AM
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Wise Words my friend xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 25, 2010 at 3:44 AM
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