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could be that the rock was just stubborn and refused to change

posted by Raysongs on April 25, 2010 at 1:23 AM | link to this | reply

The rocks bear witness to so much.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 24, 2010 at 5:16 PM | link to this | reply

WELL THAT'S A PRETTY EXCELLENT "TRY" DARLING COS I LOVE IT

posted by Kabu on April 24, 2010 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent!!

posted by calia14 on April 24, 2010 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Simone, very beautiful...I feel your inspiration in the rhythm and might
of your work!

posted by Ariala on April 24, 2010 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply

Simone

Simone how nice to remember how your mother related these memories to you.

I suppose it was a kind of a moral issue, but one can't help wondering if the rock was actually the lucky one. Very nicely written, really liked it  

posted by C_C_T on April 24, 2010 at 12:24 AM | link to this | reply

The Rock ROCKS

posted by Straightforward on April 23, 2010 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Z  For myself I kept a rock that I dug when I was four. My parents died. I moved from our house. But, I still have the rock love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on April 23, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
This is a lovely poem. I wish I could be so stedy to stay rock solid and bear witness to whatever one needed for so long. I loved the patteren it made of the writing too. I love your poems and yes to the writer, but mostly to you for bringing it to us. URA

posted by Justi on April 23, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome, i wonder if this was the inspiration for Mia Angelou's innauguration poem in 1993 for Clinton, she entitled "The Rock, The River, The Tree".  It always seemed so obviously a reference to hillary, bill and the algore.

posted by dsm_tchr on April 23, 2010 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply