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touching words...
flow in rhapsody! thanks for your poem. I like where you said something about being together will lift the hearts (?) of the soulless, 'cause I think that's what God uses true love for--to make the world a deeper, and more beautiful place for all.
posted by
Alaskan_Song
on April 27, 2010 at 8:45 PM
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Yes, I know and understand. Happy weekend to you too.
posted by
Straightforward
on April 24, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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shobana, just getting caught up. wondersome as usual!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 24, 2010 at 6:39 AM
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Have a lovely weekend too Shobana.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 24, 2010 at 6:28 AM
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I concur with all your lovely comment and it is wonderful imagery with a poignant message! I hope you are having a marvelous weekend! Love you dearly! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 24, 2010 at 12:39 AM
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Shobana, this just simply touched my heart and my fave line --- (albeit this is 'all' great) but this one tugged at me:
"I know even if the days pass too quickly
We'll be choked with untold words"
FABULOUS ~ love the analogy richness throughout this write. Elyse
xoxoxo
posted by
elysianfields
on April 23, 2010 at 8:48 AM
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Full of insight and beauty! Thanks for your mail Shobana, will write soon. Hope you're feeling fine. Have a good weekend!
posted by
Nita09
on April 23, 2010 at 4:43 AM
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This is lovely. I love the movement from "I don't know" through "I'm unsure" to "I know!" Great.
posted by
Rockingrector_retd
on April 23, 2010 at 1:43 AM
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He said
I am sure he would not be unsure if he looked into those ? eyes.
Pinks, carnations, hollyhocks. Very touching Shobana, you could knock them over if you wanted to, have a nice weekend and thankyou for your over-generous comments
posted by
C_C_T
on April 23, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Re:
mm..seems so lustorlove. thanks so much for your lovely visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 22, 2010 at 10:49 PM
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Re: That's like shobs
Abanerjee - such a sweet thing to say. Thank you mere dost.
posted by
shobana
on April 22, 2010 at 10:48 PM
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such a nice love
posted by
Lanetay
on April 22, 2010 at 10:08 PM
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That's like shobs
" ... windows to the souless are sometimes lifted by seeing us both together". with envy, mine are
posted by
anib
on April 22, 2010 at 9:32 PM
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Re: shobana
Somehow it does that. Thanks so much for your visit and comment BCA.
posted by
shobana
on April 22, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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shobana
{ Love tells who in mysterious ways love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 22, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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Re: Special and heart holding indeed, Dear Shobana!
Thanks so much Poetraye, I am so happy you liked it.
posted by
shobana
on April 22, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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Special and heart holding indeed, Dear Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on April 22, 2010 at 8:43 PM
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love it
posted by
RomaKay
on April 22, 2010 at 7:58 PM
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So wonderful it is when people can find their true love like that...Sad to say that I have seen so many marriages crumble.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 22, 2010 at 4:42 PM
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Wonderful work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 22, 2010 at 4:28 PM
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I know . . . knowing is good . . . and letting it be known to others is good as well
Nice read and have a lovely weekend yourself as well
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on April 22, 2010 at 4:23 PM
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