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Somehow I get the feeling there is going to be quite the retort on the smack on the behind! Wonderfully done, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 23, 2010 at 1:40 PM
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Exquisite!
posted by
Katray2
on April 23, 2010 at 8:07 AM
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CORNCAKE
{ Little things mean a lot sir. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 22, 2010 at 8:58 PM
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Lovely is all I can say CC. Always written in brilliance.
posted by
shobana
on April 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM
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CORNCRAKE
I loved them both and what I love most about your poetry is I get to read it over quite a few times for it all sink in.You certainly do have this business of love well understood and write of it with sublime delicacy. Cheers my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 22, 2010 at 11:39 AM
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Pathways and Ripples - Roses and Obsessions ~ (a whole lot here)
I can't make you out somehow --- as a mystery ~
I like where this leads --- deeper - very wonderful writing CC - what's on that pathway ( I was moved by the "white gown - they float on air and when thus dressed pass through to where..." Loved this verse in entirety - especially ~
Ripples ---- enhancing first impression. This made me sad CC - there is almost a finite close to ----- a love "so terribly incomplete" The imagery and the metaphor usage draws me in --CC this poem makes me 'feel' - Great writing ~ EE
posted by
elysianfields
on April 22, 2010 at 11:03 AM
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Corncrake
Bravo! Accolades! Bows ! A Toast and Flowers to the man MB and his lovely verse..Love your works
Fema I'm leaving Saturday and will return Thursday next week for tests an rest..next surgery is coming after the 13 of May..
posted by
fememefeme
on April 22, 2010 at 10:30 AM
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Great poems AGAIN.....loved them both loved the ripples.....
one never knows how far it goes
when one has something to say
the first is also a delight........get off my path if you don't believe.
posted by
Kabu
on April 22, 2010 at 10:18 AM
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