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Re: How tenuous and exploratory...
I suppose it is down to choice Pat Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 7:40 AM
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Re: Astounding in breadth and depth, Corncrake!
Thanks Raye, hope you feel better
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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How tenuous and exploratory...
I can't count the times I've tiptoed between certainty and doubt. Nicely spun!

Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on April 22, 2010 at 6:14 AM
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Astounding in breadth and depth, Corncrake!
You continually amaze..
posted by
Katray2
on April 22, 2010 at 6:05 AM
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Re: Stolen MB
Hi Fema I am really quite ordinary. I will try and feel romantic for your sake, yes I feel different already Thank you for your kind comments
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 6:00 AM
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Re: CC - writes of, to me:
I suppose it is better to resist a lot of things E.E. It just gets easier as one gets older.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:49 AM
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Thank you Simone, I guess we all have our struggles
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:45 AM
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Re: CORNCAKE
I shouldn't mention things like that Bill, It might be believed
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:42 AM
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Re: Sam
I am glad to hear help is on the way Sam, I was wondering which way to turn I always wish I had taken the other route
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:39 AM
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Re: it is amazing that you were able to put words to the inner struggle
Tzippy pleased you found it interesting, It usually happens in slow motion.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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Re: Shobana
I find people have not got good memories, you did say that I could visit your magic garden or was that a different Shobana ?
posted by
C_C_T
on April 22, 2010 at 5:28 AM
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I wish I could help you with all that conflicting emotions CC..Loved the first poem..just beautiful.
posted by
shobana
on April 21, 2010 at 8:12 PM
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it is amazing that you were able to put words to the inner struggle
that we all must endure. and you did it so beautifully that I actually felt like i was swaying back and forth being reasonable and reckless.
posted by
Tzippy
on April 21, 2010 at 5:05 PM
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I loved the close for the first poem, so exquisite for me! And for the second one here

And yes help is on its way! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on April 21, 2010 at 4:06 PM
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CORNCAKE
x What a tender web that you weave sir. Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 21, 2010 at 11:29 AM
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Superb accounts of inner struggles my friend... Both poems are fabulous :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 21, 2010 at 9:08 AM
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CC - writes of, to me:
Of Stolen ~ resisting and to write of the power of Love is incredible here --- that whisper of a kiss lingers. Beautiful poetry like the old Bards wrote once ~
and
of Other...hmmm - complex but, I perceive one being caught up in abstract thinking and of personality reasoning ~ this is whoa good with its analogy. Very nicely written - nicely more "well" written. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 21, 2010 at 8:37 AM
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Stolen MB
A romantic man are you and an inner feelings conveyed as I read this beautiful poem you don't need Help for you take one on a voyage of lives travels and thoughts..


Blessings Fema Thank your for thinking of me getting better will go for another hospital visit next month with another surgery.
posted by
fememefeme
on April 21, 2010 at 8:12 AM
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