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The title enough is intriguing, let alone the whole piece
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on April 21, 2010 at 3:48 PM
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Good advice!
posted by
WindTapper
on April 21, 2010 at 3:07 PM
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on the way to heaven
this is so great Shobana.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 21, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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Wow, Shobana - Haunting perfection of writing and message!
posted by
Katray2
on April 21, 2010 at 5:41 AM
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Thanks so much Nita. Good to see you here.
posted by
shobana
on April 21, 2010 at 1:13 AM
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Excellent thoughts and expression, Shobana! Just saw your mail; thanks! Will write soon.
posted by
Nita09
on April 21, 2010 at 1:11 AM
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Re: Heaven
Thank you CC and yes I do feel a certain amount of relief when I write. The end is one that I feel I should leave happy.
posted by
shobana
on April 21, 2010 at 12:53 AM
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Heaven
It is nice that you have faith Shobana and strength which you evidently need at this time.
I hope by writing these poems you feel a small respite. The end is only the beginning
posted by
C_C_T
on April 21, 2010 at 12:16 AM
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Good thoughts - actually great poem - and I do hope people are grateful for those that labor and toil, no matter wherever or in what field. What we pick up on the way to Heaven is amazing and what you have described here is just a pinch but very wise pinches... (well, I don't have Prada or Gucci or Choo but, I've 'berkenstocks'?)
I enjoyed this poem tremendously Shobana; in fact, one of my faves of yours. xoxo Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 20, 2010 at 9:43 PM
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shobana
w? And, all those nice things are accounted for by happiness love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 20, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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Enjoying every part of this journey..
including those occasional cups of coffee :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 20, 2010 at 8:20 PM
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I hope my trip is paved in gold
posted by
Lanetay
on April 20, 2010 at 6:34 PM
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clapping my hands with all my might and bowing low to such talent
DARLING.....yOUR WORK JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER.
posted by
Kabu
on April 20, 2010 at 6:08 PM
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To me there is nothing more divine than gratitude... Beautiful poem Shobana
posted by
Sinome
on April 20, 2010 at 5:59 PM
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This is a poem that everyone should read because it is a fine blueprint for how to live.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 20, 2010 at 5:00 PM
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Shobana, yes appreciation -- gratitude -- essential!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 20, 2010 at 4:31 PM
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Its ok sweetie, I know you will come by and check on me every now and then. Have a lovely time with Jes. I need to be at the hospital early and I just couldn't sleep and here I am. Love you too my darling friend.
posted by
shobana
on April 20, 2010 at 3:12 PM
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FABULOUS!!!! I love it to bits and pieces, it is like a blueprint for living my Shobana! I really got into the cadence and of course the refrain added perfection! Sorry I have not been here,; my daughter is at the end of big break up and I have been with her! Love you my dear friend! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 20, 2010 at 3:07 PM
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Thought-inspiring, Dear shobana...well done!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 20, 2010 at 2:59 PM
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