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Very nice work, Marta...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on April 22, 2010 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

oh wow, I want to rescue her! hope this is not a real character because
if it is, my heart is broken for her!

posted by Ariala on April 18, 2010 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on April 16, 2010 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

There is always someone who has it worse than us.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 16, 2010 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

So sad... why is she crying

Seemed like a true life story replaying in great words....

sad but nice.

love,

amy

posted by freeflyinbird on April 16, 2010 at 3:27 AM | link to this | reply

Boken wings
Emotive Simone. If this isn't one of yours, it applies to many I suspect. You have nice thoughts.

posted by C_C_T on April 15, 2010 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

that was....very moving
it has left me at a loss for words.....

posted by Raysongs on April 15, 2010 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome

h Yet it’s a realistically sad poem about a child love. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on April 15, 2010 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

 Oh God bless, yes those little Angels with broken wings...may they find healing and wholeness no matter.  xoxoxo Touching very touching, ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 15, 2010 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely poem  Regards, Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on April 15, 2010 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply

How sad Sinome..I hope it is not anyone you know and it is just a poem. To be able to ask what's right at that age is truly sad.

posted by shobana on April 15, 2010 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply