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Yes Cynthia heart is with Fernando. Thanks Sam. I hope you enjoy to read my story.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 16, 2010 at 6:01 AM
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Thanks TimmyTales... I hope you enjoy reading my story.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 16, 2010 at 5:59 AM
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Thanks FormerStudentIntern... I hope you enjoy it.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 16, 2010 at 5:58 AM
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Re: very realistic
Thanks Tzippy for your comment.
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 16, 2010 at 5:57 AM
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Re: Great dialogue...well done .....good write.
Thanks Kabu. Do you think I have a talent for being a writer?
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 16, 2010 at 5:55 AM
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Michael needs to forget Cynthia, her heart is with Fernando! I like how you put in the minor conflicts that are quickly resolved! They don't drag out and they keep the story moving. GOOD WORK!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 15, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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RV
Very well done!!
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on April 15, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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That'd be a lot of excitement for me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 15, 2010 at 3:31 PM
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very realistic
I have heard people with this kind of conversations many times.
posted by
Tzippy
on April 15, 2010 at 8:56 AM
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Great dialogue...well done .....good write.
posted by
Kabu
on April 15, 2010 at 8:54 AM
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