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posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 15, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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Loved the dialog between the two.... very well written indeed. loved the part where he was tying the shoes laces... lol
posted by
freeflyinbird
on April 15, 2010 at 12:34 AM
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Re: Amazing and deep!
Hi Raye glad you could come back, I don't think you will find many nasties here
Thank you for your comment.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 11:13 PM
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Re: Taps
One does not build a future on sugar and spice good on you Taps.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 11:09 PM
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Re: E.E.
Thanks E.E. and for your lovely example of the little ones. I think Katie would have framed this and sighed every time she looked at it. Perhaps in time showing it to her grandchildren and smiling thoughtfully.C.C.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 11:06 PM
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Re: She was me a few years bacl LOL
Is everyone a past or present tough cookie methinks ladies have dreams of power. Katie says you are not to cry.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 10:59 PM
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Re: SAM
A pity you had not met Bob first Sam, but then it would have been a different story
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 10:53 PM
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Re: Shobana
Please Shobana do not destroy a gentle myth
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 10:47 PM
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Re: CORNCAKE Bill
One can only try Bill
posted by
C_C_T
on April 14, 2010 at 10:42 PM
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CORNCAKE
J Can you knock him down in a poem? Then calm him by giving him your second poem sir. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 14, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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LOL, CC - she is definitely me...and whispers tugs at heartstrings.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 8:22 PM
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I liked the essence of the ghost very much! It reminded me of Bob and how he lingered on in my house! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 14, 2010 at 1:55 PM
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She was me a few years bacl LOL
AND WHISPERS .....BEAUTIFUL GHOSTLY like the lingering soul not ready yet to leave.
posted by
Kabu
on April 14, 2010 at 9:06 AM
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CC - I must have lost the Major somewhere in all my goings and comings --- and She is a feisty one - LOL - this has the feeling of a night visit from a spectrum or moon ray. and I'm telling you this CC - I will read your poetry - once, okay twice - sometimes 3 or 4 times. I do enjoy your poetry - its so rich truly - Your poetry brings vision and imagery so vividly ~ This of Whispers - makes me want to whisper and sigh as well - very lovely in its depth. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on April 14, 2010 at 8:33 AM
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"She" could have been me a few years back.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 14, 2010 at 7:35 AM
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Amazing and deep!
posted by
Katray2
on April 14, 2010 at 7:24 AM
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