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Re: Lovely and haunting work, Shobana!
Thank you Poetraye for your visit and yes you are right, it induces mine too.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 7:37 PM
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Oh yeah, the bad often seems to outweight the good, doesn't it?
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 14, 2010 at 7:31 PM
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"Tears are words the heart cannot express."
posted by
TAPS.
on April 14, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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Shobana
Well done, I know about many tears and you have expressed them beautifully
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 14, 2010 at 4:08 PM
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Often
Tears are a great release for intense pain. Two weeks ago my work was horribly slated as monotonous at a poetry seminar and I had to endure the jibe 'and that's you told!' It took four days of emotional darkness before the tears flowed and then another two weeks before I felt able to write about the experience.a
Thanks for your beautiful contribution!
posted by
2Philomena
on April 14, 2010 at 10:56 AM
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Well done, young Lady!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 14, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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Lovely and haunting work, Shobana!
The tears of a child, when welling from pain or loneliness induce my own.
posted by
Katray2
on April 14, 2010 at 7:07 AM
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I have had my share of tears and it is amazing how they set the mood for the climate of the given circumstances! And Often was an excellent title! The close was rather emotive, too! Love you dearly and I am with Elyse, I do enjoy your poetry! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 14, 2010 at 2:10 AM
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Thanks so much Romakay.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 12:06 AM
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Re: Often
Hi CC, thank you so much and have a good day.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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Re: Shobs
Thanks so much abanerjee for your visit and encouraging comments as always.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 12:04 AM
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Hi Nita, thanks so much for your visit and you're welcome.
posted by
shobana
on April 14, 2010 at 12:03 AM
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Very well expressed, Shobana. Thanks for your note!
posted by
Nita09
on April 13, 2010 at 11:55 PM
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Shobs
I just love the way you put your thoughts with the finest arrangement of a heart sensitive, alive and bubbly
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posted by
anib
on April 13, 2010 at 11:43 PM
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Often
Hello Shobana the morning greets with the first sense of comfort from your poems, I should have said sweet, but it is both
posted by
C_C_T
on April 13, 2010 at 10:59 PM
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very powerful.
posted by
RomaKay
on April 13, 2010 at 9:35 PM
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Thanks so much Elyse and good nite.
posted by
shobana
on April 13, 2010 at 9:24 PM
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shobana
d Such an elaborate treatment of tears touches me love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 13, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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ah yes ~ you do describe 'tears' with such great verse here. Shobana, I do so enjoy your poetry...write on
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 13, 2010 at 8:08 PM
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That is great lustorlove, don't let anything trigger it again.
posted by
shobana
on April 13, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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I think my tears are dried up
posted by
Lanetay
on April 13, 2010 at 7:05 PM
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Unfortunately this is so often true ...and you have expressed it so well
posted by
Kabu
on April 13, 2010 at 6:05 PM
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Touching! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on April 13, 2010 at 5:46 PM
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