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This fits my life so perfectly. I think you captured something well we all experience.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 13, 2010 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

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Lustorlove, that is something to notice. thanks so much for your lovely visit.

posted by shobana on April 13, 2010 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

I noticed the wind is blowing a cold breeze

posted by Lanetay on April 13, 2010 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

and I am on the way out (after reading your lovely poetry) to go notice --- life goes by too quickly and the seasons as well. Lovely poetry Shobana ~ good to read you. Elyse

posted by elysianfields on April 13, 2010 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

That was a marvelous use of refrain! It was rock solid imagery all the way through that evokes poignant thought! Well done, indeed! Your sam loves you dearly, too! Your poetry of late is varied and astoundingly wonderful!

xoxoxoxo

posted by sam444 on April 13, 2010 at 9:41 AM | link to this | reply

We often miss the wood for the trees! Hope you're doing well, Shobana! Will catch up with you soon.

posted by Nita09 on April 13, 2010 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

I'VE NOTICED THAT I NEED TO NOTICE MORE,

posted by Riversidepoet on April 13, 2010 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Noticed

The clarity becomes more obvious after your reminder Shobana

posted by C_C_T on April 12, 2010 at 11:28 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you abanerjee, I am glad you liked the imagery.

posted by shobana on April 12, 2010 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you BCA - I am glad you liked it.

posted by shobana on April 12, 2010 at 9:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: These days I notice everything...each day is so precious.

Yes, they are sweet Kabu..so precious.

posted by shobana on April 12, 2010 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Chuck, Glad you liked.

posted by shobana on April 12, 2010 at 9:14 PM | link to this | reply

shobana

Imagery after imagery like a film you show in this so very elevating poem. Beautifully executed in purity of thought and language. Great work dear Shobs

posted by anib on April 12, 2010 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

] Very delicately textured love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on April 12, 2010 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

You sure have an eye for detail, Shobana.

posted by Straightforward on April 12, 2010 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

These days I notice everything...each day is so precious.

posted by Kabu on April 12, 2010 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

It seems like we noticed every thing except other things that were not noticed