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A wonderfully sensuous poem. 'The music of my heart singing' makes me tingle inside.
posted by
2Philomena
on April 14, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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Gorgeous and alluring - beautiful and sensitive and just plainly romantic with Love - Sinome I enjoy reading your poetry ~ miss you when I am gone. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 13, 2010 at 9:47 PM
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We will be one flesh,
one love,
Not fooled by eyes drenched in blinding colors.
There will be no confusion, no doubt,
no need to solve a mystery.
I LOVE YOUR POEMS, I THINK YOU HAVE A BRAVE AND DARING AND LOVING HEART, MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOURS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on April 13, 2010 at 9:16 AM
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This is simply excellent, my friend
Fantastic sensuality! Stimulating!!!
" the heat of love brightening up the dark", I just loved this imagery. So sweet and very well written xoxoxox
posted by
anib
on April 12, 2010 at 8:32 PM
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How lovely Sinome..yes you need a certain amount of courage to be able to love someone. Thanks so much for your visit and I think your husband is so right. How many kids do you have Sinome?
posted by
shobana
on April 12, 2010 at 8:25 PM
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There is so much we want to say, but we cannot bring ourselves to do it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 12, 2010 at 6:41 PM
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romantic and special and so well written that I just want to yell
KISS HIM.
posted by
Kabu
on April 12, 2010 at 10:49 AM
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Simone
] I read the poetry of your heart love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 12, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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how romantic
posted by
Lanetay
on April 12, 2010 at 8:33 AM
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sinome .......yes.. you said it, you clearly said it, there is no other way
top say it, you made it transparent... I love the entire song and the story behind it.... and the unfold mysteries tooooo...
posted by
Star5_
on April 12, 2010 at 8:18 AM
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Brave
The reasons for which we seek love does not matter or how it is sought through memory,
or manifestation of the ideal through one's whole being. But do I need to tell you this when you explain it poignantly.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 12, 2010 at 7:17 AM
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to visualize by description,
it takes a real talent to paint a picture with words. In my minds eye, I saw a young lady writing this in her diary, then rereading it as if a script,and preparing herself to say it to the one she loved. Picture ? I got the whole video on this one. Excellent, m'lady....Ray
posted by
Raysongs
on April 12, 2010 at 7:08 AM
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take that leap of faith!
posted by
Ariala
on April 12, 2010 at 6:06 AM
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