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Re: Last Line
The last line or last verse is usually where my twists end up. I've got to try something
new. Thanks for the input.
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:44 PM
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Re: Outstanding!
Those stamps (?) say it all. Thank you!
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:42 PM
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Re: Man Borrowed the Circle
I can always use a hug! Thanks!
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:40 PM
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Re: Concept
I guess it's really more of a folktale than a poem....
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:39 PM
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Re: Close
One day I'll surprise you and put the twist in an unexpected place!
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:37 PM
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Re: Circles
Life must be the ultimate circle...right?
posted by
dalie
on April 13, 2010 at 9:32 PM
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there is so many circle in this life right? so nice
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 12, 2010 at 7:25 AM
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I really liked your close! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 11, 2010 at 5:02 AM
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+ What a beautiful concept. KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 10, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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Man Borrowed the Circle
I borrowed the circle to give you a big hug nice joy. Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on April 10, 2010 at 8:33 PM
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Outstanding!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 10, 2010 at 8:24 PM
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love the last line
posted by
RomaKay
on April 10, 2010 at 8:21 PM
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