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I well remember those days
when we couldn't have cared less
whether the rains came,
or the sun shone,
or the night was dark
and without a star in the sky.
Hail was something to laugh about,
a storm was a reason to cuddle,
and the winds blew up
a whirlwind of loving.

posted by TAPS. on April 8, 2010 at 6:49 PM | link to this | reply

Nice memories can bring comfort in time of need.

posted by Original_Influence on April 8, 2010 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

You break my heart
Frequently.  Your poetry is sad and beautiful and so utterly engaging that I cannot but feel as you do while I read.  Wonderful work, sweetie xoxoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on April 8, 2010 at 8:26 AM | link to this | reply

moments
This must be real Simone you have your memories and now you are in a time zone of sadness, at least they are nice memories and sometimes we cannot ask for more.

posted by C_C_T on April 8, 2010 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Bottled moments, bottled joy. Beautiful as always my dear friend. Thanks so much for following my Turkey adventures.

posted by vogue on April 8, 2010 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

So poignant and nostalgic!

posted by Nita09 on April 8, 2010 at 1:40 AM | link to this | reply

\ Rain and long rhythm show us the emptiness beautifully love.  BC-A, Bill’s Roost ­

posted by BC-A on April 7, 2010 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

How sad to be in that situation Sinome. Such poignant imagery.

posted by shobana on April 7, 2010 at 8:32 PM | link to this | reply

Not having that person there for comfort can be so discouraging.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 7, 2010 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Kabu on April 7, 2010 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
It rained here all night and you put it beautifully luv

posted by WileyJohn on April 7, 2010 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply