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I love the conclusion! It does seem to be that way! Love you, too! Your sam

posted by sam444 on April 8, 2010 at 10:37 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you yellowrose, I am glad you liked it.

posted by shobana on April 8, 2010 at 8:22 PM | link to this | reply

When these three are close peace is present...beautiful poem Shobana.

posted by yellowrose55 on April 8, 2010 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Interesting realism
Thank you cpklapper for your visit and you are most welcome.

posted by shobana on April 8, 2010 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you dear... it strikes a cord this day. And yesterday as well.

posted by PinkWeaver on April 8, 2010 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

I'll take faith, hope and love anyday and work them right into the "seen".  The "seen" without faith, hope and love isn't much worth having.  I like your work.

posted by TAPS. on April 8, 2010 at 8:08 AM | link to this | reply

hope, faith and love hear so good. thanks for always visit and give me some comment on my blog Shobana.

posted by RV_lunar on April 8, 2010 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting realism
Thanks for stopping by at my blog.

posted by cpklapper on April 8, 2010 at 5:40 AM | link to this | reply

beautifully written as always....lovely way with words.
expressed so well.

posted by _Symphony_ on April 8, 2010 at 5:37 AM | link to this | reply

The three most important things...beautifully expressed. Thanks for your visit Shobana!

posted by Nita09 on April 8, 2010 at 1:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Seen
Hi CC..LOL. Well I love the idea of daisy chains around my wrists and flowers in my hair but you know it would be kinda odd for me to walk into office looking all flowery. I mean truly what would the assistant say..LOL. It is 3.12pm here. I shall be off soon. Now you have yourself a lovely day and thank you for stopping by.

posted by shobana on April 8, 2010 at 12:13 AM | link to this | reply

Seen
You are Shobana. hey it is 7am OK You are full of ideas, your poems dip a toe into a pool of ideas.  What about the unseen Shobana it may put daisy chains around your wrists and flowers in your hair,   

posted by C_C_T on April 7, 2010 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

\ I feel depth in this poem love.  BC-A, Bill’s Roost ­

posted by BC-A on April 7, 2010 at 9:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: how inspirational and beautiful
Hi Tzippy, thanks so much for liking the poem, It just comes and goes..LOL and the days I don't miss it, it turns out ok.

posted by shobana on April 7, 2010 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

another lovely poem ...well done dear one.

posted by Kabu on April 7, 2010 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

This poem is giving me so much to think about.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 7, 2010 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana
You are the epitomy of what you have expressed luv,love,faith, hope.

posted by WileyJohn on April 7, 2010 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

how inspirational and beautiful
sometimes I wonder where you find those words beautifully laced together

posted by Tzippy on April 7, 2010 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply