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I more or less made a comment at you most recent poem that would have been better served here! It can be so hard to find the right word(s) to tell the immenseness of the heart and all that it conjures up! Well done, though!
posted by
sam444
on April 8, 2010 at 8:28 AM
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Re: 9STAR
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 8:14 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thank you, Bill, I am delighted that it did impress
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 8:08 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you so much dear friend, I had a feeling that you would be the one to argue with this poem (although very sweetly) xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 8:06 AM
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Re: Sam444
thank you so much... as I posted this poem here I found myself hoping that it would be one that all writers could easily relate to
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Re: Elyse
Thank you so much, dear friend, I am delighted that you enjoyed this
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:48 AM
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Re: spiderfly
Thank you... and I love that description, even as I agree completely (although getting me to use just one word might be tricky :P )
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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Re: Very moving
Thanks Malcolm
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:29 AM
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Re: every day you seem to write what I live ....dear Tzippy my heart goes out
Thank you so much, Kabu, you are a very lucky lady
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:04 AM
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Re: I have not felt that strong surge of love for a long time
Perhaps your heart is letting you know that it is open again so you will not be too surprised if it reacts to the right person
posted by
lionreign
on April 7, 2010 at 7:03 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on April 6, 2010 at 10:25 PM
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lionreign
{ This is a clever concept. It impresses not only in its argument that words are inadequate for expression but in its passion that it expresses anyway. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on April 6, 2010 at 8:02 PM
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Amazing poem dear friend :-) but I beg to differ :-) for your words do express the passion and love you feel and are capable of... if not totally by their intrinsic meanings by allowing us to glimpse at the depth of the feelings that through them you convey. Superb work sweetie xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 6, 2010 at 4:36 PM
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I can so relate to this! There are times when words fail the emotion! Superb! sam
posted by
sam444
on April 6, 2010 at 2:16 PM
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Yet your expressiveness here endears me...LionReign, a true Poet - Artist, feeling that the richness cannot be revealed...(I sigh because I'm fattened by the feast here) Elyse (inspired)
posted by
elysianfields
on April 6, 2010 at 11:02 AM
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sometimes a single word is like an explosion of expression ....wonderful
posted by
spiderfly
on April 6, 2010 at 10:47 AM
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Very moving
and passion in abundance!
posted by
malcolm
on April 6, 2010 at 10:35 AM
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every day you seem to write what I live ....dear Tzippy my heart goes out
to you and I thank you dear lion that you write of true love so beautifully.
posted by
Kabu
on April 6, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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I have not felt that strong surge of love for a long time
you make me long for those moments again. Or perhaps I am once again ready with my heart mended from the past pain, and your poem only reminds me of the potential future....
posted by
Tzippy
on April 6, 2010 at 7:21 AM
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