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so big but so graceful are these creatures dolphins
posted by
Lanetay
on April 6, 2010 at 6:25 PM
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The dolphin is the perfect animal for this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 6, 2010 at 5:42 PM
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'...dolphins of your time...'...too cool.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 6, 2010 at 4:30 PM
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I loved dolphins of your time; open imagery that can take the reader wherever they want to go! Well done, indeed! And KUDOS! Love you my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on April 6, 2010 at 3:58 PM
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Dolphins of your time - that gave it a different twist!
posted by
Straightforward
on April 6, 2010 at 2:51 PM
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Really atmospheric!
posted by
malcolm
on April 6, 2010 at 10:31 AM
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What's a nice poem Shobana? having a nice day Shobana and thanks for your comment at my blog
posted by
RV_lunar
on April 6, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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I have heard so many different stories about the mysterious nature
of the creatures of the sea. And I do believe all of them. :)
posted by
Tzippy
on April 6, 2010 at 7:46 AM
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Reflection
Well I see them now Shobana and the mysterious water. The moon shimmering on the dolphins chosen play ground quite enchanting
posted by
C_C_T
on April 6, 2010 at 3:41 AM
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Moonlight,deep waters,dolphins ........reminds me of Goa.Great work on reflection.
posted by
shamasehar
on April 6, 2010 at 3:02 AM
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Shobana... I do not see dolphins here in the Miami Coast often, the beach is too shallow and it goes long into the sea... but in the west coast of Florida they are plentiful and when I go there I love to swim with them. You are right, in moonlighted evenings they love to play and jump and it is a wonderful sight when they come near enough to shore so that the city lights allow us to see them shinning in the silvery moonlight. Lovely poem, xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on April 5, 2010 at 10:11 PM
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shobana
Y I love real dolphins and oh, wow the analogy and imagery’s deep love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 5, 2010 at 9:52 PM
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Goodnight Elyse darling and sleep tight. I'm glad you liked the poem and thank you for your visit.
posted by
shobana
on April 5, 2010 at 9:11 PM
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(the moon is directly half but, as you know this is the only moon icon on here) I am going off to bed but wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. It is playful - and made me want to look for the dolphin's playing round the seashore of the moonlight. Beautiful Shobana ~
G'night. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 5, 2010 at 8:50 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Nautikos. I am glad it made you smile..well you always make me laugh with your jokes too.
posted by
shobana
on April 5, 2010 at 7:15 PM
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Shobana
Beautiful! Another one of your cheerful poems that make me smile...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 5, 2010 at 7:13 PM
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Re: A lovely poem of hope for good times to come.
Thank you Kabu and yes it is. Take care.
posted by
shobana
on April 5, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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A lovely poem of hope for good times to come.
posted by
Kabu
on April 5, 2010 at 6:48 PM
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