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I love you Haiku's!
posted by
mariposa75
on June 21, 2010 at 7:18 PM
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Among the flowers, is a quiet and calming place..your talent for writing comes with such ease. I could almost smell the roses.
posted by
yellowrose55
on April 27, 2010 at 9:58 PM
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Day and daylight
dispell the shadows of night and troubled dreams...
posted by
Ciel
on April 7, 2010 at 12:02 PM
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I loved shadow's silent wing! It gives it that first arousal, when slumber is no more! Very good work!
Very good! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on April 5, 2010 at 7:56 PM
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Nautikos - I love rose scented dawnings literally.
posted by
shobana
on April 5, 2010 at 7:06 PM
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So many vivid images in so few words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 5, 2010 at 5:17 PM
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I love it , Naut. I wish you would write more Haiku, you are awesome.
Love TAPS comment, too. LOL
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on April 5, 2010 at 2:21 PM
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Ah but I like when you Haiku us. This is stunning ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on April 5, 2010 at 11:00 AM
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Nautikos
e J You spray with words a lot in the space so appropriate for a Monday morning. You put in scent yet. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 5, 2010 at 7:19 AM
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Naut, the scent urges us to find the joy in sorrow!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on April 5, 2010 at 5:57 AM
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I know all about that hue of forgetfulness. It hits me at the wrong time and leaves me silent, and searching for a wing to escape the shadow it left on what I was trying to say.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 5, 2010 at 5:52 AM
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