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Is this your story Tzippy? Really, life is a unique experience for all of us. It can be an adventure, that helps us grow or a nightmare that makes us want to run and hide. Beyond it all, later sometimes wisdom is revealed that wasn't seen before. Anyway, enough said, I'm rambling on like I do sometimes.
posted by
yellowrose55
on May 1, 2010 at 8:48 PM
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That burn I could feel and it is really horrific to have to go through this whole ordeal. Thank you Tzippy for your visit and wishes..Happy Easter to you too.
posted by
shobana
on April 2, 2010 at 2:36 AM
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tzippy
Z I’m touched by your pain, the past, and the poetic way that you share it love. YZBC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on April 1, 2010 at 9:43 PM
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Powerful writing..
It is hard to read of a child's suffering, but healing flickers throughout the story and leaves an impression of hope and growth.
posted by
Katray2
on April 1, 2010 at 7:27 PM
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You definitely have the gift of keeping everyone interested, but I just hate it when little children have horribly painful things happen to them.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 1, 2010 at 5:15 PM
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TZippy
Great story well written, I look forward to the whole thing. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on April 1, 2010 at 4:42 PM
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What a horrible accident! A most difficult way to get shocked into reality! Such a gripping portrayal, too! And I didn't realize I had forgot to bring you links! My daughter is coming today for Easter and I have been so busy trying to get things done. But here they are:
Part 7 &
Part 8 sam
posted by
sam444
on April 1, 2010 at 3:40 PM
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Death 3
Hi Tzippy I nearly missed your visit, I know it is a job when one cannot sleep.
I try not to look at cruel things on the television or read books with the same perspective.
You are so intelligent couldn't you write something for children, not love stories because one becomes too involved in one's own feelings and love is transient. Your work is fascinating
posted by
C_C_T
on April 1, 2010 at 10:20 AM
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that was indeed a lot for a nine year old, or for any age
posted by
Lanetay
on April 1, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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It's funny how a perceived brush with death will end our fascination for it
you have a gift for relating, while I read your writing part of me feels like I am witnessing the whole thing and the other part feels a bit like we are sat over cups of tea with me listening to you... either way I feel involved.
posted by
lionreign
on April 1, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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This just proves what I've thought since I was about 9 years old.
Kids know.
posted by
Pat_B
on April 1, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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ouch is all I have to say --- oh I would be fainting. I am just reading this tonight and need to go back and read from the beginning... good writing by the way. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 31, 2010 at 10:10 PM
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I t is almost always so...the wish is far from the reality. That Blister
was a orrid mistake. If only she had used cold water.
posted by
Kabu
on March 31, 2010 at 9:29 PM
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Superb writing Tzippy... Loved this whole series...xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 31, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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I have often felt that when most of those who wish to die are faced with possibly dying or pain that they change their minds quite quickly.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 31, 2010 at 8:17 PM
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TZIPPY, SHOCKING, AND CHANGED YOU?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on March 31, 2010 at 8:10 PM
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tzippy
This is great. Is this based upon your life? Guess I will have to read from the beginning.
posted by
TIMMYTALES
on March 31, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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WOW ! Powerful writing. I almost died in 85 in a house fire.
This hits home. oxxo
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 31, 2010 at 5:48 PM
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Yes, it can take some truly traumatic experience for us to
realize we want to live after we have been hoping for death for so long.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 31, 2010 at 5:35 PM
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