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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on April 2, 2010 at 9:52 AM
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Stunning imagery
I am intrigued and dazzled, both. This poem is a delight.
posted by
lionreign
on March 31, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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Wow! Coolness!
Well done!
posted by
strat
on March 31, 2010 at 4:38 AM
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Oh I love it
and your poem made me hungry...... now where are those strawberries and cream [:P]
posted by
freeflyinbird
on March 31, 2010 at 2:47 AM
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Re: Like a Queen looking down upon us all
Thank you Sunnybeach - am glad you liked it and that is surely a different way of looking at it.
posted by
shobana
on March 31, 2010 at 1:23 AM
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Like a Queen looking down upon us all
Very beautiful
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 31, 2010 at 1:21 AM
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Re: perfect
LOL, ok I will. You know CC..it is raining so heavily here right now - practically a thunderstorm. I'd have to drive home shortly and the lightning is terrifying..gosh. Alright then keep that image of me making my own interpretation of the rain drops while eating strawberries. Not yet in the comfy chair CC..it is somewhere up there on a skyscraper..lol.
Thanks so much for your visit CC. You made me laugh with your comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 31, 2010 at 1:17 AM
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perfect
Keep chasing those clouds Shobana, when it rains I'll think of you eating strawberries without cream and making your own interpretation of the rain drops. Don't let them fall on your desk or are you already in that comfy chair?
posted by
C_C_T
on March 31, 2010 at 1:12 AM
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Re: So....Beautiful!
Thank
you Karen for stopping by my blog with your lovely comment. I am happy I made you smile. From what I read, your niece is an angel - God sent.
posted by
shobana
on March 31, 2010 at 1:03 AM
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So....Beautiful!
Shobana-
Thank you so incredibly much for your comment on my blog! It means so much to me! She truly is an angel here on this earth! I am so happy that you commented, otherwise I may not have come across your poetry...how very beautiful it is!
"These clouds that pass would have
a thousand little droplets of news from
afar and near she thinks
Almost perfect, it moves from blackness to white"
I love this phrase....it will make me wonder from now on what kind of news from afar those tiny rain droplets hold. What a beautiful piece of artwork you wrote! THANK YOU for making me smile wide!
~Karen~ ~VelvetBlue~
posted by
Velvet_Blue
on March 30, 2010 at 11:29 PM
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Shobana
So so telling, so beautiful.
posted by
Justi
on March 30, 2010 at 10:52 PM
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PErfect indeed :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 30, 2010 at 10:03 PM
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Shobana, you made me hungry --- your imagery is fantastic - and I'm glad the black went on into white - Elyse
(that full moon is stunning this night, have you seen?)
posted by
elysianfields
on March 30, 2010 at 9:19 PM
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/ Ingeniously both enchanting and melancholy love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 30, 2010 at 8:15 PM
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There is something heavenly about the setting. I would love to have that view.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 30, 2010 at 7:08 PM
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you just made me hungry
posted by
Lanetay
on March 30, 2010 at 6:50 PM
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Grand imagery...got an extra chair :)? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 30, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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I read this first, then I noticed the pictures. I made my comment and I got to read a second time. I felt like I was in bliss even though a storm may be brewing, then you made me hungry, lol and finally I was comfortably lazing in a chair and pondering! Grand imagery, indeed! Love to you!!! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on March 30, 2010 at 5:33 PM
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Re: Alimental sensation! nice description of...of...the sky?
dsm - LOL, its really up to your interpretation, passing blackened clouds here to me is negative thoughts. Thanks for the visit.
posted by
shobana
on March 30, 2010 at 5:03 PM
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Alimental sensation! nice description of...of...the sky?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on March 30, 2010 at 4:54 PM
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