Comments on Seeking My Level

Go to Hidden eeries of desire echo to angelsongs of loveAdd a commentGo to Seeking My Level

Re: Elyse
  Thank you so much

posted by lionreign on March 31, 2010 at 6:16 AM | link to this | reply

 Simply inspiring ~ wow, I'd love to be you right now - the imagery you pen is luminescent.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on March 30, 2010 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444
Thank you, Sam, I am particularly glad you enjoyed this poem

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: shobana
thank you so much

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: luxuries I can not afford
Thanks Tzippy - to be honest I mostly wouldn't want the luxuries (any meal that needs more than 2 forks is more than I want to sit through) but that said I will go see the affirmations - I have used them in the past and have great respect for their potency

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I really appreciate your thoughts ...all that glitters....but a the beauty
Thanks Kabu, I am delighted that you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome
Thank you so much sweetie you are making me blush again.

 

I confess this poem hides a little bit of a joke in it - in my own style it tells you that while staying in London I left the posh hotel and found a pub to spend my time in (that's the brass and oak) and the pub was called The Rose


posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Re: wow
Thanks Sue

posted by lionreign on March 30, 2010 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

What a great poem! I could the aura of a protagonist's desired existence amid the antagonistic realm of the day! Excellent imagery and word usage! sam

posted by sam444 on March 30, 2010 at 6:19 AM | link to this | reply

I love this very much Lionreign..the beauty of the solitude and just being you. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.

posted by shobana on March 29, 2010 at 7:50 PM | link to this | reply

luxuries I can not afford
and the simple beauty of the rose that you CAN afford. very beautifully put. I suggest you get the abudance affirmations from my blog, couple it with your talent and there wont be a luxury you cant afford :)

posted by Tzippy on March 29, 2010 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

I really appreciate your thoughts ...all that glitters....but a the beauty
of a rose, the perfume, exquisite in it's very fleeting existence.

posted by Kabu on March 29, 2010 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

So... when did you come visit me???  LOLL  just kidding love... This is superb Neil... the simple beauty of that rose somehow seems even more alluring when you contrast it with the empty splendor of all that gold... Being you sounds just great... what could be better than the sensitive, sweet,  talented and  romantic poet you are :-)  Great work!  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on March 29, 2010 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

wow

posted by Star5_ on March 29, 2010 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply