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It is as Justi says..you are truly a poet. I love this poem.
thanks so much for your visits and comment Sinome.
posted by
shobana
on March 28, 2010 at 8:45 PM
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Sinome
Now my friend you have gone and done it! You made this tough old crusty woman cry. You are a POET! not a person stringing words like pearls on a string but one weaving string and fitting diamonds into the weaving. Bless you dear lady.
posted by
Justi
on March 28, 2010 at 1:20 PM
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I feel that this has manifested from a place deep within your soul
and it is the beauty of creation that gives birth to beautiful elgant things that grow and blossom and than fade away, that is the life.
posted by
Tzippy
on March 28, 2010 at 1:11 AM
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Gift
Oh, Simone this is so sad, all that little flower went through, it is such a nice poem.
When you feel sentimental perhaps you will tell us how a little bird picked up a few of it's seeds and flew across a green meadow on it's travels. One day you saw to your amazement this beautiful swathe of color and realized the sacrifice had not in been vain.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 28, 2010 at 12:18 AM
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Sinome
I was so taken by this post because I once took a picture of a tree out back here, it was growning up through a crack in the rock of the pre-cambrian shield.You wrote about that flower so beautifully, I remember that fir tree.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 27, 2010 at 9:20 PM
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its a song about ill fated love, career or expectations?
posted by
dsm_tchr
on March 27, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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what wonderful thoughts, poor lonely little flower....I believe it can
happen to us too if we are asked toblossom where we cannot survive.
posted by
Kabu
on March 27, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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Sinome
I like your ode to a little wildflower...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 27, 2010 at 7:10 PM
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Isolation can lead to one falling apart.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 27, 2010 at 5:11 PM
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Superb...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 27, 2010 at 3:13 PM
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