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Azur
Thank you Azur - let's face it, the title is yours. I hope you don't have it copyright!
posted by
johnmacnab
on January 8, 2011 at 2:39 PM
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I can't help but smile when I see the title of this
Happy New Year to you
posted by
Azur
on January 6, 2011 at 8:49 PM
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majroj
This comment surprised me majroj - it's a long time since I read 'sandbox.' But now that I do I can see there is far too much dialogue. As for the readers? I always assume they are extremely intellectual and intelligent - aren't you? Please excuse any mistakes - I've been away with the faeries for a couple of days, nobody knows where. So bad that I had to go to bed , after being beat 9-1 at pool - I suppose shit happens.
posted by
johnmacnab
on January 5, 2011 at 8:41 AM
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How much to tell Dear Readers, and how much to assume they "get"?
Don't listen to me, I can't write dialogue to save my wife, er, life.
posted by
majroj
on January 3, 2011 at 3:11 PM
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dsm_tchr
Thank you dsm_tchr. I appreciate it.
posted by
johnmacnab
on March 29, 2010 at 5:09 AM
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johnmacnab, nice going!
posted by
dsm_tchr
on March 28, 2010 at 12:10 PM
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sam444
Thank you sam444. For a first edit it seems not to bad, but there are a few obvious mistakes that need correcting. Azur's suggestion is a great one, and you can bet I'm going to be using it.
posted by
johnmacnab
on March 28, 2010 at 5:19 AM
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Azur
An excellent idea Azur. I'll start doing that on the next instalment - after I've tidied up a few glaring mistakes in this one.
posted by
johnmacnab
on March 28, 2010 at 5:15 AM
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I thought this read very well, too! and I liked Azur's suggestion for I am will remember to use it, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 28, 2010 at 12:59 AM
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I smile every time I see this blog title
One device I am using so i don't have to say who is talking so often is for the speaker to occasionally use the other person's name in the dialogue.
posted by
Azur
on March 27, 2010 at 12:01 PM
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