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Sinome, I'm on a bit tonight and wanted to read my fave 'romantic' ~ this is so touching --- beautiful in imagery and leaves me wanting more... Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 25, 2010 at 9:34 PM
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Our memories can often be more comforting than our reality
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on March 25, 2010 at 9:13 PM
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I love to make memories daily. Special ones like yours come along rarely.
You are such an encouragement.
posted by
Justi
on March 25, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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+ Still a beautiful memory though love. BCA, Bill’s R$st
posted by
BC-A
on March 25, 2010 at 8:25 PM
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Sometimes memories like this makes it all worthwhile...just beautiful.
posted by
shobana
on March 25, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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memories, no one can take that away fromus.
posted by
Kabu
on March 25, 2010 at 7:54 PM
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So sad it is when those wonder moments became mere memories.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 25, 2010 at 6:23 PM
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Beautiful
the flavour of memories and loss is just wonderful in this poem.. Beautifully written sweetie
posted by
lionreign
on March 25, 2010 at 8:24 AM
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Paradise
Beautiful and spiritual imagery.
posted by
2Philomena
on March 25, 2010 at 3:25 AM
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paradise
lovely little bounce to this Simone we are lifted into a state from which we may go no higher, dreamy.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 25, 2010 at 1:14 AM
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we are developing
a love /hate relationship. I love your writings, but I hate the loss you remind me of. Ahhh.. well, you must have been there, so we are actually kindered souls. Did I spell kindred right ? Bravo !!
posted by
Raysongs
on March 24, 2010 at 11:01 PM
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Hi Marta
The ending is so poignant. Excellent imagery "life smiled through our wet lips". xioxoxo -:
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posted by
anib
on March 24, 2010 at 10:31 PM
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