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Reality and dreams so often merge with me
I see her against a backdrop of the traffic outside, or hear her in the voices that pass by...  you capture that moment of merging and awakening with such perfect and beautiful clarity.

posted by lionreign on March 25, 2010 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Gale
Believe me Shobana, it was a tough job getting back from the unknown, I just could not resist that place. If anything has been stolen, I shall have to blame it on the inclement weather.  

posted by C_C_T on March 25, 2010 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

The Gale
A powerful evocation of the force of nature.

posted by 2Philomena on March 25, 2010 at 3:29 AM | link to this | reply

So beautiful, as always! Thanks for your visit! will catch up soon! till then, here's the link:

http://colorsofindia-nita.blogspot.com/


posted by Nita09 on March 24, 2010 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

just plain beautiful
but more than that, you see it all so clearly, that is a dejavu moment of clarity, there is nothing more beautiful than that.

posted by Tzippy on March 24, 2010 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

Shama says take a break!!! Why, what happened?"

posted by anib on March 24, 2010 at 10:20 PM | link to this | reply

I was swept away! Your imagery is so vivid.Take a break & rest,you will feel better. 

posted by shamasehar on March 24, 2010 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Shobs
This is what I call an existential poem; they are always so elevating of the spirits. Excellent flow of thoughts and feelings. You are a delight .

posted by anib on March 24, 2010 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply

Shobana
Another lovely creation luv

posted by WileyJohn on March 24, 2010 at 9:29 PM | link to this | reply

thank goodness there was no wind her.  Here is the answer to antsy:  

ants·y

[ant-see] Show IPA
–adjective,ants·i·er, ants·i·est. Informal.
1.
unable to sit or stand still; fidgety: The children were bored and antsy.
2.
apprehensive, uneasy, or nervous: I'm a little antsy since hearing those storm warnings.

posted by Lanetay on March 24, 2010 at 7:08 PM | link to this | reply

Those things can change at the blink of an eye.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 24, 2010 at 6:57 PM | link to this | reply

I thought this was very exquisite imagery! I love how it came together with such a nice cadence! And I say BRAVO my Shobana! Love you! Your sam

posted by sam444 on March 24, 2010 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Very romantic for a dream. Thanks for sharing. Chuck.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on March 24, 2010 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re:
Thanks Sinome. Glad you liked.

posted by shobana on March 24, 2010 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

Great work! xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on March 24, 2010 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply

Most excellent, shobana!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 24, 2010 at 3:21 PM | link to this | reply