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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 23, 2010 at 3:29 PM
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Oh such a beautiful portrait
Such a beautiful painting your brush left of depression. One thing I disagree with you on... You do not and I say not need to remake yourself. You are perfectly and magnificantly formed as David said of all man and the result from God's creation. What you write of is a beautiful memory, you are who, where and with whom God intended, enjoy it to the fullest. You are such an asset to Blogit.
posted by
Justi
on March 23, 2010 at 2:58 PM
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beautifully written, sweetie
So immediate and so gorgeously tender.
But you can fly, you know xoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on March 23, 2010 at 7:55 AM
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Fly
Yes very nice linking the leaves into the affair, it is little touches like that and it swings into reality, skillfully presented.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2010 at 12:09 AM
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beautiful
unfortunately, been there, done that..I hope it was fiction for you, as it wasn't for me.
posted by
Raysongs
on March 22, 2010 at 9:06 PM
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Wow!! That was amazing! Melancholy and sweet, memories of a beautiful love living still inside your mind.
posted by
calia14
on March 22, 2010 at 9:02 PM
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Yes you can fly my sweet one....and you do....your poetry transports us to
a igher place...it must take you there too. Of course your mind flies to wondrous places. You special special person.
posted by
Kabu
on March 22, 2010 at 8:24 PM
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J Loving imagery love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 22, 2010 at 7:44 PM
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I wish I could fly all the time Sinome, just beautiful.
posted by
shobana
on March 22, 2010 at 7:27 PM
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Beautiful word painting of a love once shared
and the loneliness felt when something broke the physical bond of togetherness.
Wonderful memories, though, can always be recalled and relived by the one left behind.
It's much better than never to have loved or been loved at all.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 22, 2010 at 5:57 PM
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Romantic but sad
I hope this is only a state of mind. Have a wonderful evening. Regards, Chuck.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on March 22, 2010 at 5:07 PM
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Sinome...
You are one eternal romantic, aren't ya :)? With an imagination as vivid as yours, sure you can fly, anywhere, anytime!! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on March 22, 2010 at 5:00 PM
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This is so sad. The memories are a mix of pleasure and pain with more of an emphasis on pain.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2010 at 4:40 PM
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memories can be rough sometimes
posted by
Lanetay
on March 22, 2010 at 4:40 PM
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