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WileyJohn
Thanks a ton for liking, pray even a sample would be ample. Everything is all I want, after all
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posted by
anib
on March 16, 2010 at 10:15 AM
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CORNCRAKE
How true, your music, my music, everybody's music .... integral, all.
posted by
anib
on March 16, 2010 at 10:10 AM
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abanerjee
Then I pray for you ample of everything, liked yout poem....
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 16, 2010 at 9:14 AM
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Now you speak my music, patience is of the essence.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 16, 2010 at 8:05 AM
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shamasehar
"utthe nahin hain haath mere iss dua ke baad!" Wah, aapke kehne ka andaaz, Urdu mein, mere kehne se kahin behetar hai. Haan, vaastav me, sabhi kuch to maang liya bina haath uthaye. Iss tarah mujhe khayal nahin aaya. Thank you so much, dear lady. 
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posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 9:21 PM
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Hi, abanerjee
Sab kuch maang liya aapne iss dua ke saath.......utthe nahin hain haath mere iss dua ke baad! Bahut achha kaha aapne.
posted by
shamasehar
on March 15, 2010 at 9:09 PM
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Straightforward
Couched in the simple is 'ample'. Isn't it so that your son also desires
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posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 9:06 PM
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shobana
I myself liked this: All I want is everything. The going word is "all". As I was saying to elyse, this one came on the spur of a moment. Thank you so much you find it astounding, dear
dost.
posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 9:04 PM
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elysianfields
I am so happy to see you glow; this one just came by ~ without my having to make any effort. Think such ones are direct connect to the heart
~Aba
posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 9:01 PM
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Reminded me of something a father of an eligible bachelor told me:
My son says : caste no bar, religion no bar, etc. when it comes to marriage. So it should have been so simple!
posted by
Straightforward
on March 15, 2010 at 9:00 PM
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Sinome, my dear friend
I am thrilled that you liked this short poem of mine xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 8:57 PM
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A human trait abanerjee to want all and be all inspite of everything. This poem has astounding depth my friend. Thank you for sharing and your visit.
posted by
shobana
on March 15, 2010 at 8:13 PM
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Aba, this is Poetry Divine ~ as Sinome says, "WOW" ~ I'm glowing from your gorgeous words here.
Your depth is incredible. Ely
posted by
elysianfields
on March 15, 2010 at 1:35 PM
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WOW!!! Loved this my friend :-) Lovely verses and filled with meaning. xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 15, 2010 at 12:16 PM
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