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So very sad when the bottle consumes the individual! You did a very fine job of putting it into perspective, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on March 21, 2010 at 10:41 AM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 17, 2010 at 10:11 AM
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Shobs
If Hum - fine poetess.. Tum - great poet ! Shukriya. So sweet of you , my
posted by
anib
on March 15, 2010 at 11:05 PM
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Re: Just delightful....new mythology I love it.
Hello Kabu, I am glad you liked it. Hope you had a great time celebrating my friend.
posted by
shobana
on March 14, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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Re: Wow, Shobs,
Abanerjee - Thank you mere achaa dost. If Hum - fine poetess..(Ok struggling here with the little I know) Tum - great poet ! Shukriya for reading again..just a fun poem.
posted by
shobana
on March 14, 2010 at 6:55 PM
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Wow, Shobs,
The style, the technique, the imagery ... all stunning for me .... it is so entertaining too. My heart tips to you, you fine poetess. Now I am going to read the poem again
posted by
anib
on March 14, 2010 at 6:24 PM
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I've known a person or two to have that sort of struggle...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 14, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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Long Island
Sorry Shobana I'm in a worse state than I thought, I switched off and I thought Shobana does not rhyme with two, I hope Kabu doesn't read this, That part should be ignored. Is it not a pity that one cannot change a simple fact.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2010 at 1:45 PM
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Long Island
Can we do advertisements now Kabu? Or dare I ask have you had one or two?
Well I can't help it if your name rhymes with two. I'm sure you are a sensible lady and I would scrub this and I like your work so much. So why do I torture myself, I think it must be the teetotaller demon. Ps. two ladies have said that I can say what I like on their sites.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 14, 2010 at 1:20 PM
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So entertaining ... I wanted for more. Long Island eh? Oh I recall way back in my early 20's (okay not that far back
- well - I don't want to age myself Shobana) I had a Long Island Tea --- thought it flavorful but oh my, all I recall is having someone take me home that soon - and then I was told how potent they are and the ingredients. I never made that mistake again (well, on purpose that is) ~
--- This was a superb write, my dear friend. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 14, 2010 at 9:53 AM
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Just delightful....new mythology I love it.
posted by
Kabu
on March 14, 2010 at 9:28 AM
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You have such great imagination.
posted by
vogue
on March 14, 2010 at 7:34 AM
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Good stuff once again!
posted by
malcolm
on March 14, 2010 at 5:31 AM
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That was fun!
posted by
Nita09
on March 14, 2010 at 4:22 AM
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