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Such a beautiful poem
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on March 10, 2010 at 8:59 PM
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The butterly is an excellent symbol of spring.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 10, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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Very cool indeed!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 10, 2010 at 9:12 AM
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Poignant Marta How many are the metaphor of tattered wings and a slow dance....sad and beautiful poem. Excelent
posted by
merkie
on March 9, 2010 at 7:24 PM
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Sinome
Beautiful, and it makes me long for spring...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 9, 2010 at 6:27 PM
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That is just so beautiful. May I share it with a friend?
posted by
mariposa75
on March 9, 2010 at 10:06 AM
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Sinome
I have to make it unanimous another beautiful one!
posted by
Justi
on March 9, 2010 at 1:35 AM
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I concur with Wiley John, Sinome. What a beautiful poem this is and the imagery is just stunning. Thank you for your visit and lovely comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 8, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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Sinome
I love what you can do with words, colour and the senses: ".....Her yellow wings bright like the sun, move to the music that the wind plays..." when it comes to poetry, 'you da lady'
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 8, 2010 at 9:21 PM
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