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I liked how you used once as a solid refain! But the affirmation at the end gave it its impetus! KUDOS, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2010 at 5:43 AM
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there are a lot of onces in our life
posted by
Lanetay
on March 10, 2010 at 8:47 AM
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I find this to be so romantic. A once in a lifetime opportunity this can be.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 9, 2010 at 3:53 PM
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Wonderfully done, Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on March 9, 2010 at 11:47 AM
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Once
You got it in one Shobana, interestingly described and nicely presented
posted by
C_C_T
on March 9, 2010 at 10:23 AM
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Just once I fell madly in love
and that means I can have it all for with Wiley there is all.
posted by
Kabu
on March 9, 2010 at 10:03 AM
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J Indeed The best thing to want’s to be yourself love. Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 9, 2010 at 3:19 AM
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Like a mirror into a broken heart your poem reflects what so many have felt. It has universality and beauty. Excellent Shobana! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on March 8, 2010 at 9:14 PM
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Hello Shobs
This is just such a beauty ... ONCE, wanting laughter to cry ... WoW! I loved the idea, the cadence ... all make excellent sense. Great job, mere dost.
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posted by
anib
on March 8, 2010 at 8:47 PM
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Shobana
Very creative and intresting layout in words. Bravo!
Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on March 8, 2010 at 8:19 PM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you very much Wiley John for your wonderful comment.
posted by
shobana
on March 8, 2010 at 7:20 PM
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Shobana
How very creative and mind challenging you are luv, terrific
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 8, 2010 at 7:17 PM
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Shobana
This is so well done. I loved it as usual.
posted by
Justi
on March 8, 2010 at 6:21 PM
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How well I know this feeling, my friend...so well-illustrated!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 8, 2010 at 5:34 PM
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