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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 10, 2010 at 10:15 AM
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Re: I love your descriptive writing style.
Thanks, MandaLee! I try to write for the senses. Hypnotists understand that when you stimulate at least 3 senses, the subconcious can begin to feel something is real. A really good story pulls the reader into its reality the same way. That's what I'm going for!
posted by
Ciel
on March 10, 2010 at 10:13 AM
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I love your descriptive writing style.
posted by
Amanda__
on March 9, 2010 at 2:58 PM
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Re: It isn;t my genre - no :-)
Thanks, Azur, I will give that some thought as I re-read this, and see where I can apply your suggestion.
posted by
Ciel
on March 8, 2010 at 11:14 AM
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It isn;t my genre - no :-)
but i wondered if when you describe what the people go through whether it's worth focusing more close - giving closer detail on their facial expressions, movements - picking out one or two - to throw more light on what they were going through
posted by
Azur
on March 8, 2010 at 10:38 AM
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