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Hi Shobana
What I loved here Shobs, is the personification of the sea, and the entreaties you make to it "not to go". Wonderful and tender!
I am otherwise fine except that I am trying to do too many things at one time. But, it too, will pass. Thank you, your concern touches me.
posted by
anib
on March 9, 2010 at 6:05 AM
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Let the waters of the sea just be...very cool stuff!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 8, 2010 at 5:55 PM
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There's something to be said about the acceptance you write of in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 8, 2010 at 3:45 PM
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Oh how I long to again explore
the coastline with its ebbing tide,
with sandy shore and driftwood store
in fog, with roaring waves beside,
to comb the beach once more.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 8, 2010 at 1:39 PM
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Shobana
Kind of a lovely prayer for the sea and all she supports luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 8, 2010 at 12:31 PM
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Let the waters of the sea just be.
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CONVERSATION BETWEEN YOU AND SEA.
posted by
Riversidepoet
on March 8, 2010 at 8:51 AM
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the sea continues on no matter what
posted by
Lanetay
on March 8, 2010 at 8:34 AM
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so wonderful to walk or sit by the sea shore and just watch the awesome
power of the sea.This poem took me to the beach.Thankyou
posted by
Kabu
on March 8, 2010 at 7:13 AM
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How utterly beautiful
Thank you for sharing this
posted by
lionreign
on March 8, 2010 at 6:33 AM
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Z This poem leaves us with meditation for the senses. You create a beautiful image of the seashore love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on March 8, 2010 at 6:00 AM
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What a great conclusion! It is best to let Mother Nature carry on in her own majestic way! Such fabulous imagery my Shobana! I am doing a bit better these days! I hope to get caught up on the ones who have stopped in to see me today! I feel asleep early last night, more like early evening, and I didn't get a chance to call my son on his birthday! I am calling him at work today and extend my apologies! Love you and I am off to get caught up on your poetry! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2010 at 3:15 AM
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Hi, shobana
Wonderful imagery! Words seemed to be playing with the waters of the sea! Just saw little Aidan's snap,a future heart breaker for sure!
posted by
shamasehar
on March 8, 2010 at 2:37 AM
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Re: sea
Corncrake - LOL, yes I suppose you can call it an outburst of memories. Could not think of what to write and being in this hot city today makes me crave for the breeze of the sea. Ok then, shall I say the bodyguards too have killer smiles..One cousin and 2 sisters of mine..ravishing beauties they are.
Thank you and I am glad the poem gave you a somewhat calming effect.
posted by
shobana
on March 8, 2010 at 12:25 AM
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sea
A very calming influence as I face a frosty morning, a natural outburst of memories?
Oh, have a compliment only one killer smile on the photo?
posted by
C_C_T
on March 8, 2010 at 12:12 AM
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