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Re: Blame it on your Mama!
I enjoy hearing from you; your poetry and your comments indicate you are a thinker!
Thanks! dalie
posted by
dalie
on March 11, 2010 at 4:27 PM
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I had a different thought but read your explanation and thought it would have been an excellent conclusion. sam
posted by
sam444
on March 10, 2010 at 3:35 PM
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Re: Blame it on your Mama!
I knew I would hear from you! Super! This began as a religious poem ending with Father and Son taking the place of Mother...but I guess I chickened out and rewrote the conclusion. Great hearing from you...I value your input...dalie
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dalie
on March 8, 2010 at 4:11 PM
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EVEN WHEN WE ARE ALL ALONE , WE ARE NEVER ALONE, AS ONE GOSPEL SONG SAYS, " I HAVE A BIRTH I CAN'T REMEMBER AND ONE I CAN'T FORGET", THIS IS A GREAT THOUGHT PROVOKING POEM, WELL WRITTEN, THANKS FOR SHARING
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Riversidepoet
on March 8, 2010 at 9:11 AM
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