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Excellent poem for those dark times and bad days. An artful and powerful way of expressing it.
Wow, Thanks!!!
posted by
mariss9
on March 9, 2010 at 9:59 PM
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I like how you play off of the typical things a poem like this would mention by using the word "proverbial."
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 6, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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Hazel
First of all it's good - but what's even more interesting is that in spite of its sad theme it has a kind of cheery rhythm to it, and therefore isn't that dark at all! I guess even dark moods can't totally eclipse your basic cheerfulness...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 6, 2010 at 7:45 PM
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it does sound a wee bit depressing
posted by
Lanetay
on March 6, 2010 at 10:04 AM
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Thank you..the blues do seem to bring out the poetry in me.. lol
I'm still chirpy Cricket.. we all have our days. LOL wink. :)
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on March 6, 2010 at 6:59 AM
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I am here to rescue thee! I loved the imagery for the sake of the poem! I know the feeling all too well myself! I love it when a feeling or a mood can bring forth fine poems!! Kudos to you my Cricket! Love ya too, my friend! sammie
posted by
sam444
on March 6, 2010 at 6:45 AM
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Well...I hope not.....
This is not the cricket we know......
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on March 6, 2010 at 6:33 AM
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That rescue me thing... sometimes it happens.
I call those moods "get outta town" days, when I want to let every problem solve itself and just take off for parts unknown. I'm so glad you added the little note that you're not that depressed. Hope you're not depressed at all, but looking forward to at least one neat thing today...
posted by
Pat_B
on March 6, 2010 at 5:30 AM
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Hey, when did you get back? LOL Welcome home!
posted by
Ariala
on March 6, 2010 at 5:10 AM
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