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That is the first stop in my dream
Dearest Karen,

*Hug* ~ here is a simple poem I wrote for you.. *Shy* Hope you like it...


Karen, oh dearest Karen,

I thank God for I was able to find you.

Once again, God shows His LOVE through you.

Yes, both of us knew ~ what is was like,

Yes, we have been through.

If only you knew,

How beautiful the journey was,

Guided and meant to find you!


I know you do, yes, you do.

Taking the time to write and reply,

Taking me ~ the whole part of me,

Oh my God, you are the first friend I bare my heart to.

(To be continue.....)


Yes, dear, you shall find the rest in my Syracuse Pike's Creation. Before I go, I want to say thank you. For I found the first stop to reach in my dream. Thanks, dear, thanks!


Tons of LOVE,


posted by Syracuse_Pike on April 2, 2010 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

I just saw your comment at my blog and am excited to read your poetry as well! If you need help with anything let me know and I will do what I can! I think your are going to like our little writing community; we are very supportive of each other! sam

posted by sam444 on March 5, 2010 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

I believe every day is a blessing, too! How nice to be comfortable with who you are and have a person that you care for! Life is good when one is satisfied! Well written, too! sam

posted by sam444 on March 5, 2010 at 10:45 PM | link to this | reply

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