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Sinome
Do you see why I am so passionate for so many to see this Ultimate Love you speak of? This is a perfect description, even photo if you like of the 'born again' salvation of the Lord Jesus Christ. All becomes possible, known and different than any other. You know when you die immediately you will be joined with the father and all perfection will be illuminated in the Love, one love. Not only that but the Love of the Holy Spirit comes to live inside you so that no matter what happens you have this resident love and peace. My apparent lack of peace at times is not for me and mine but those who have not taken this awesome love to themselves. Bless you beautiful lady.

posted by Justi on March 5, 2010 at 10:09 AM | link to this | reply

I liked this one so much that I stopped for another read...   xoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on March 5, 2010 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome
Oh yes love is stronger than death and you make it so with your writing here too

posted by WileyJohn on March 4, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

h If we could name it it would be easier to find. However lovers have defined and refined it before. In this way there’s hope love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on March 4, 2010 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

Sinome
And I hope and wish for you that you find it...

posted by Nautikos on March 4, 2010 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

A search that will be lifelong for many.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 4, 2010 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

You indeed show the power of love. A depth of instilled desire! Excellent - seeker of the true love!

posted by merkie on March 4, 2010 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply

SUCH GENTLE LONGING...THAT BREAKS THE HEART TO READ

posted by Kabu on March 4, 2010 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

If I were to find it... this true love I seek
I know that I  would be blinded by it, yet I  would see clearly. 
It would probably render me deaf,
yet, I  would  be overwhelmed  by the beauty of  it's song.

SORRY SOMEHOW PASTED WRONG WORDS ON MY OTHER COMMENT, MAY THIS TRUE LOVE COME YOUR WAY SOON.

posted by Riversidepoet on March 4, 2010 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

How my heart is filled with

This Love deep within with gladness

You and I together surrounded by

God's creations

I PRAY YOU FIND THAT LOVE YOU MENTION IN THE LAST FOUR LINES, THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM AND AN EVEN MORE BEAUTIFUL DESIRE DEEP WITHIN YOU, THANKS FOR SHARING.

posted by Riversidepoet on March 4, 2010 at 8:39 AM | link to this | reply

That "unnamed thing within" is not the same for everyone.  It took me a long time to realize that and come to grips with it.

posted by TAPS. on March 4, 2010 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

Marvelous!
My dear, of the two of us you are the bigger romantic by far (and I am jealous) xoxoxoxoxoxox

posted by lionreign on March 4, 2010 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply

There's nothing like it!

posted by Ariala on March 4, 2010 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

Love the contrasts--you're a real genius! Thanks very much for your usual kind comment! Nita.

posted by Nita09 on March 4, 2010 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

R I guess that love’s both blind and deaf. However you make it beautiful, love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on March 4, 2010 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Just so gorgeous Sinome.

posted by shobana on March 3, 2010 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply