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she stood

there,

unmoving,

as a statue,

in a forgotten park.

A SLOW, SLOW DEATH

posted by Riversidepoet on March 4, 2010 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

suicide by smoking

R It gets to the point that I hear the landlady, yelling about a clogged up bowl in the bathroom. And worst the slow choking death of many outside the awesome atmosphere of a Humphrey Bogart movie love. BC–A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on March 4, 2010 at 4:06 AM | link to this | reply

a fine noir scene
in verse.



Carl Peter

posted by cpklapper on March 3, 2010 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

cigarettes
Good poem!  Don't you ever get dull?

posted by 2902 on March 3, 2010 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

wow, some really good writing here!

posted by Ariala on March 3, 2010 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply