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Another thing I liked about this poem was Mother Nature's revenge as it were! She can raise some havoc at times! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on March 8, 2010 at 3:22 AM
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A wonderful entreaty, Dear friend...nice work, shobana!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 1, 2010 at 11:43 AM
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from the heart Shobana ~ the butterfly as wings ~ the chimes that ring - this is so angelic - from your angelic heart ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on March 1, 2010 at 5:39 AM
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Enchanting work, Shobana!
posted by
Katray2
on February 28, 2010 at 8:36 PM
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Very sweet words
posted by
Azur
on February 28, 2010 at 6:35 PM
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Very well written. Sometimes even wind chimes and butterflies cannot lift sadness.
posted by
mariposa75
on February 28, 2010 at 6:05 PM
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Shobana
A very lovely prayer and we love our wind chimes and the butterflies in summer. Thanks for posting luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 28, 2010 at 4:24 PM
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A very fine prayer/poem asking for God's guidance during rough times. We need him more than ever!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 28, 2010 at 3:20 PM
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Thank you Sinome, glad you liked.
posted by
shobana
on February 28, 2010 at 2:10 PM
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Thank you lustorlove and you are so right.
posted by
shobana
on February 28, 2010 at 2:09 PM
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A BEAUTIFUL PRAYER, THOUGH NOT SEEN , THERE ARE MILLIONS WAITING TO COME TO YOUR SIDE, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 28, 2010 at 12:30 PM
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Beautiful. I haven't seen a butterfly in a long time; but my windchimes still tinkle.
The butterflies will return when it is time and the season is right.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 28, 2010 at 12:29 PM
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Excellent work xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 28, 2010 at 9:49 AM
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yes there is a lot of turmoil in this world
posted by
Lanetay
on February 28, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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Butterfly
This the pain that you are expressing is that nature destroys and is oblivious to to a mightier
force which we hope will prevail. Not a very good explanation, but I did not want to make another in case it was wrong. Thank you for your comments. As one lady said don't get a swelled head. I am more worried about selecting the next poem
posted by
C_C_T
on February 28, 2010 at 7:42 AM
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The White butterfly
Thank you for that lovely prose on this Sunday morning. Have a great day. Lucinia
posted by
LuciW86
on February 28, 2010 at 6:21 AM
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Amen! I agree with Sam,the last lines were great!
posted by
shamasehar
on February 28, 2010 at 5:24 AM
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Sam
Hello stranger, thanks so much for your visit and comment. love you too my dear friend.
posted by
shobana
on February 28, 2010 at 4:30 AM
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What awesome imagery my Shobana! I loved these lines, such a grand way to end a poem! And the white butterfly was a brilliant use of nature and about out creator! These lines:
Lord in anguish, renew the faith,
Lord in sadness, let not there be an ache,
Lord in your kindness, lead us and let us not stray.
Amen and well done! Love you my dear friend! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on February 28, 2010 at 3:55 AM
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