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This is an evil story revelation makes me feel despondent a bit, but excellent writing.
posted by
Justi
on February 27, 2010 at 11:07 AM
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A bit bloody and brutal for my taste, but a great exploration
of the 12-year-old mind. I always like a story of retaliation against a bully.
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on February 26, 2010 at 4:54 AM
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I could read more about this character and unsolved murders. You have
brought this evil alive ......he is the answer to so many ...but why?
posted by
Kabu
on February 25, 2010 at 11:13 AM
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CarolBell
Well you've done it to me again. I've been glued to this story like the last one, you are just a superb writer. If I ever see Carol Bell on a book of short stories in Coles, I will buy more than one copy, I would distribute them to my sons and daughters. I am so happy that as a boy I never killed the bully but just beat him with one solid punch to his nose on that day when I had had enough. I did it right in the lunch room, one time.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 25, 2010 at 9:51 AM
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I want more
This is the perfect prologue for a fictional novel.
posted by
StrickGold
on February 25, 2010 at 7:37 AM
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