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I really enjoyed this story. Made me wish I had an imaginary friend. Sounded like the perfect friend. J. S.
posted by
jamsut
on March 9, 2010 at 9:29 PM
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There are few posts that I think warrant this length but this was a gripping story! I appreciated the back story which enhanced the overall story and kept the reader interested! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 24, 2010 at 3:53 PM
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I have read some of your work and want to read it all. This post is too
Long, I wish you would break it up into about three or four posts. I can't stay with anything that long. It is good writing and I want to hug you and tell you a lot about a lot of broken people I know who are so happy today, it is all available. I will be back.
posted by
Justi
on February 24, 2010 at 2:12 PM
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Re: CarolBell
Thank you for your kind words. I did consider making two blogs out of the story but I was afraid it would interupt the flow to the point where the reader would not want to pick it up again. Posting it the way I did holds the same danger but at least it was all there. I am absolutly delighted with your comments. Thanks again.
posted by
CarolBell
on February 24, 2010 at 1:21 PM
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Thanks for visiting my blog..My Wiley said that you had visited is and that
I really should come toyour post and read something marvellous. So I did and my heart has been really touched by what you have written here. This is superb and so real as though it is you who lived tis.
I read back over your other posts....my heart broke for you losing your little girl......Time can oly hea lso far...I know.
Your writing is a gift for you reach into the soul of a thought and make it live. Thank you for enriching my day.
posted by
Kabu
on February 24, 2010 at 10:21 AM
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CarolBell
Thank you for visiting my blog so that I was able to find your blog and read this story you wrote. It is an excellent story and so well written that I coudln't stop until the end.
Now I have to be very honest with you because that's how I am. I said to my Kabu (Helen) that you had read my post and I was sitting there with your story in front of me and I griped about it being soooo long and I usually don't read a long blog.
I told another blogger friend recently that a blog of over 1000 words was too long and I just couldn't read it. I should have just shut up and read her too.
So today I shut up and read your story and I was so gripped with it that there was no way I was putting it down. You are a very gifted writer and should be published.
My 2 oldest brothers had a 'make believe' friend they played with my dad used to tell me, but I forget his name now. Oh, my oldest sister Eileen was a nun but you would have loved her because she was kind and loving and loved children.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 24, 2010 at 10:11 AM
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