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Finest poetry, Shobs
If I have something to really call classic, this is THE one. FANTABULOUS. PHENOMENAL !!!
ed it through and through.
posted by
anib
on February 25, 2010 at 9:30 AM
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Fabulous illustration, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 24, 2010 at 7:22 AM
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I loved that ending. It's the icing on the cake. White cake of course.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 23, 2010 at 6:33 PM
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Poignant and beautiful! Thanks very much for your comment and mail; will be in touch soon! Hope you're doing well. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on February 23, 2010 at 9:10 AM
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So moving...
So sad. This is beautifully written.
posted by
lionreign
on February 23, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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Shobana
I agree with Corncrake Kudos! So deserving and the heart waits.
Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 23, 2010 at 8:42 AM
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Winter
Nice poem Shobana, I just want to shout out this lady is worth much more than the guy she is waiting for.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 23, 2010 at 7:16 AM
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{ Aseasonal poem that loves through itswords. KBC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 23, 2010 at 4:35 AM
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Oooh that poem made me feel warm and cold at the same time! Nice write
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on February 23, 2010 at 3:19 AM
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Bravo! Great write.....
posted by
DJHPOE
on February 22, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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THE WARMETH OF THE SPRING SUN WILL BRING CHEER TO EVERY HEART, THANKS
posted by
Riversidepoet
on February 22, 2010 at 10:21 PM
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very rich and very deep great descriptions
great poem, full of life.
posted by
Tzippy
on February 22, 2010 at 9:55 PM
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Shobana
I feel like you're right next door writing that beautiful love poetry luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 22, 2010 at 9:54 PM
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So full of imagery --- wintry - and white emits from this whole poem here. And yet, I feel the warmth of Love yearning and it brings the blush of red ~ This is sooo good Shobana. Shares such rich meaning and depth ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 22, 2010 at 9:05 PM
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shobana
As the snow is swirling again tonight, after a few days that seemed to hold a promise of spring, your poem beautifully expresses my own disappointment...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 22, 2010 at 7:32 PM
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You have summed up my past month
so eloquently and so beautifully. Thank you for your kind words also.
posted by
skye08
on February 22, 2010 at 7:07 PM
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Beautiful Shobana :-) xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 22, 2010 at 6:27 PM
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Re:
Thanks so much for your visit lovelyladymonk.
posted by
shobana
on February 22, 2010 at 6:13 PM
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wow
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on February 22, 2010 at 6:11 PM
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Hello My Sam, so incredibly nice to hear from you on all counts. Thank you sweetie for stopping by. My seminar will be on for the two Mondays coming too. Think the rest did you good as you are back to your cheery self. Take care and love you too.
posted by
shobana
on February 22, 2010 at 5:41 PM
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So sad Tears will be drops of ice crystals. Excellent images and emotional heart tugs! Thanks for comments Shobana!
posted by
merkie
on February 22, 2010 at 5:10 PM
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Not a place one would want their love to end up!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 22, 2010 at 4:00 PM
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Touche! What a great poem! I adored, 'Don't go melting my heart' Fabulous imagery throughout and I can happily report I am now caught up on your poetry! Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on February 22, 2010 at 3:17 PM
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