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This is melancholy - but it's so rich and palpable that I read over and yes, over again. It draws me in. Stunning portrait here. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 22, 2010 at 7:22 PM
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This really touch my heart it is so out the box. Great read!
posted by
Mystereo
on February 21, 2010 at 3:09 AM
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Hi Corncrake, I could feel the sadness of this poem..so touching. I hope you are ok though as these days I look forward to reading you.
posted by
shobana
on February 21, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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This was very well conceived and I loved the presentation! Excellent imagery! I am getting a bit stronger and will work my way to catching up! Thanks for stopping in to see me, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 20, 2010 at 6:03 PM
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So meloncholy......I appreciated the the drab weather fitting with the drab
mood. Gurgling down the drain.....sometimes that's where thoughts belong with the waste water. Cheer up ol' bean.......blogit friends are always here for a joke for a laugh together.
posted by
Kabu
on February 20, 2010 at 3:46 PM
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CORNCRAKE
Such a very sad poem my friend but you can lighten up and smile for I have come with my frail inability to understand a good poet. Smile then because you just know how hard I have worked to understand. You have been thinking in sadnes in the rain of one who has passed from your life, perhaps even a nun. .......
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 20, 2010 at 3:20 PM
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Corncrake I left my email if you would like to write me or if you want to call me my # is 1-661-264-2284. I feel so bad that I think I'll stop writing blogit .My hearts breaking that I offended you. Eufemia Dee Tatham
etatham@sbcglobal.net.Please let me know.
posted by
fememefeme
on February 20, 2010 at 1:04 PM
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Corncrake
I enjoyed your poem very touching. and Thanks for your comments I don't understand what happened it sounds like I've offended you. My intentions is not that but I apologize if I offended you in every way with deepest sorrow and a miss understanding.
Eufemia Feme
I enjoy all the poems I read and I feel bad I made you feel the same I love Blogit and it is my only way of communicating with others for I live alone way out in the desert. I ask your forgiveness if I have offended anyone else.. Eufemia Dee Tatham etatham@sbcglobal.net
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fememefeme
on February 20, 2010 at 12:46 PM
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