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You've got style ~ I like your writing...yes, you do draw the reader in ... I felt as if I was walking right beside you, yes, even taking the poppy off because the pin may just stick me - and even that small feeling that I've commited a sin or desecration of something sacred. This is great ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 22, 2010 at 7:25 PM
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You have a way with words and you make the reader not only reach yet feel!
posted by
Mystereo
on February 21, 2010 at 3:13 AM
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Wonderfully written Corncrake, reminds me of the times I go shopping alone. Somehow I love it as I have the time to linger and take my time with it.
posted by
shobana
on February 19, 2010 at 7:16 PM
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CONCRAKE
You are the most enjoyable of reads and I loved this poetry because it almost described my shopping event alone today, plastic bags in hand.I even had to take a pass on a cherry topped cake, even though Kabu was back at home.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 19, 2010 at 6:58 PM
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Corncrake
Shopping I enjoyed this very much I too think about all the goodies I've seen and wonder How once I ate that stuff but tomorrow is another day tonight I will take my pills and head for bed.
Blessings Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 19, 2010 at 9:37 AM
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this just made me fluff my feathers and want to Mother the poet.
Loneliness rips at my heart.
posted by
Kabu
on February 19, 2010 at 8:26 AM
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awww
posted by
PoetikliNclynd
on February 19, 2010 at 7:57 AM
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Oh you are such an enjoyable poet!
posted by
Darson
on February 19, 2010 at 7:05 AM
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