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Shobs,
Shobana, I fall short of words. You are on fire, fire of finest poetry. Elysian wrote, inspired by this and she did it as only she could do it. I just applauded in wonder.
posted by
anib
on February 25, 2010 at 9:36 AM
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I hope you had a great weekend! I liked this poem very much! It portrays innocence and begs the question at the same time with poignant references. I thought it was very well blended and non threatening but more to evoke thought! KUDOS and a
Love you, too! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on February 22, 2010 at 3:09 PM
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Deep and real hard to the core, life and the old world the wind whoa!
posted by
Mystereo
on February 21, 2010 at 3:29 AM
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Oh the old innocent days ... miss 'em!
posted by
Aspire2Inspire
on February 20, 2010 at 10:52 AM
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is there any innocence anymore?
posted by
Lanetay
on February 20, 2010 at 8:55 AM
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Beautiful and delicate---wonderful to see you back! Just mailed! Have a great weekend! Nita
posted by
Nita09
on February 20, 2010 at 4:03 AM
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Hey, this is such a 'touch'y piece on innocence!
posted by
Straightforward
on February 19, 2010 at 6:45 PM
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I arrived here today via Elysianfields
Recently I held a two-day old baby. Perfect innocence
posted by
Azur
on February 19, 2010 at 12:05 PM
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wow, that is a beautiful powerful poem
and yes... there is a little innocence left...
posted by
lionreign
on February 19, 2010 at 7:50 AM
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Yes, there is innocence born anew every day..
In a child's eyes, in loving, sharing, learning..if only there was a totality of awareness and embrace, as so beautifully conveyed here through your verse. Thank you.
posted by
Katray2
on February 19, 2010 at 6:05 AM
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Re: Innocence
Corncrake - Thank you so much and I'm glad you could relate to it.
posted by
shobana
on February 18, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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Innocence
Hi Shobana very disconcerting I can feel those tiny lips, so you can send power through your writing
posted by
C_C_T
on February 18, 2010 at 11:17 PM
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How very very sweet and yes, poignant --- because we all do ask that question of innocence and I believe truly Shobana that we can become as innocent as a child again; no matter. Beautiful poetry, Shobana ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 18, 2010 at 8:51 PM
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yes, you can return to your original innocence
that is what they tell me
posted by
Tzippy
on February 18, 2010 at 8:29 PM
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You're welcome Merkie,thanks to you too and you too have a lovely weekend.
posted by
shobana
on February 18, 2010 at 8:04 PM
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Sweet and soft, cooing babes Beauty personified and seen with loving eyes..Lovely Shobana. Thanks for reading and your comment. May you have a great weekend!
posted by
merkie
on February 18, 2010 at 8:01 PM
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Yes there is innocence... I see it every day in the eyes of children... and even in those of young people who still believe in things I have long since found out to not be. There IS innocence Shobana :-) Beautiful poem xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on February 18, 2010 at 7:41 PM
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shobana
I saw one of those little darlings when I walked my dog this afternoon, sitting in his stroller, wide-eyed, with glowing cheeks, and as we got close he reached out for my fluffy poodle. Mom asked if he could pet him, I said sure, and he put his little hands in the doggie's fur and cooed with delight - and even though it was cloudy, suddenly the sun came up for me...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 18, 2010 at 6:19 PM
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Innocence is a beautiful and heart wrenching attribute.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 18, 2010 at 6:00 PM
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sweet.......
posted by
Star5_
on February 18, 2010 at 5:51 PM
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$ But, you’ve found enough of it to write it down well love. BC-A, Bill’s R:):(st
posted by
BC-A
on February 18, 2010 at 5:40 PM
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innocence
Don't ever lose faith - it's out there waiting to be re-discovered - even after it's been tempered by experiencel
posted by
2902
on February 18, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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Some of the things I've seen have made me ask that question...Dealing with younger people I still find that innocence, I am thankful to say.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 18, 2010 at 4:23 PM
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Re: Oh that delicious smell of a tiny baby yes....kissing that little wee cheek
Good Morning Kabu, hope you are feeling better..yes all it takes is a baby at times.
posted by
shobana
on February 18, 2010 at 1:58 PM
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Oh that delicious smell of a tiny baby yes....kissing that little wee cheek
reminds us that there is innocence ...for awhile.
posted by
Kabu
on February 18, 2010 at 1:55 PM
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Re: Shobana
Hello Wiley John, thanks so much. so nice to hear from you so early in the morning..you too have a lovely weekend.
posted by
shobana
on February 18, 2010 at 1:48 PM
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Shobana
That was lovely, like the innocence of a baby you are. Have a happy weekend too.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 18, 2010 at 1:45 PM
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