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What an awesome close! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 16, 2010 at 3:59 PM
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CORNCRAKE
That's what I did man, "I drank the milk and gambled on romance." Gave up the booze, indigestion is gone and now I can dance,
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 15, 2010 at 9:25 PM
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Omen
I agree with Elys Kudos. I had to read this one twice deep rooted to make one thing. Fema
posted by
fememefeme
on February 15, 2010 at 9:08 AM
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Omen : Warning or premonition? Insight or Foresight?
this is so rich with metaphor and imagery - I had to read a couple of times (okay another time more)
I was mesmerized by the 'bird' imagery especially - the eagle soaring with a power - the doves - maybe a stale idea or image but, birds such as heron (so graceful) and form - how it does stitch movement and cadence --- and yes champions - yet, the struggle to write even when in writer's block is poetry within itself I find.
and life - sweet or bitter as wormwood (I have some of this growing in my gardens) - I hope will always reach out to the poet - the writer in one; even if only met halfway, that's almost fully inspired... This is how this inspired me, Corncrake ~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on February 15, 2010 at 8:52 AM
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S This is an excursion into words that taste. The philosophy spreads through the lines. It leaves the reader both satisfied and curious. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 15, 2010 at 7:56 AM
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